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Takin' Cake

 
 
 Had cake??????? Go'wan........Eat It Too !
 
 
                                            cake  //        cake, just
 
                                                         cake.
A cake in  
lovelovelove                birthDAY
                                         cake..........the
 
                                                          d a y             of birth
                                  in the realm        of    cake.
      A   day'A'cake             in the realm of                Birth(Day)        
                                                                                         cake
                                                                                         cake,
                                                             o,         for the love of
 
                                                               tasty cake for a cake to taste //
 
Some(some)           (so many)                     get Dead
                                                                    get Dad
                                                                get Dead
                        before
                                     they've'ad        their taste of       c a k e.
 
So what?      Y'think       aye    c a r e      about        c a k e ?    AND death?
                       ( Being all on the same platter
)
                    THInk aGain !                         Ever        "take the cake"?
 
Yeah. Go'head.   Take the bloody cake!
                                                                     Give it a try!  
                                                      ....and don'f'get to   ask 'em what ye think.
 
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2020dkzkpoom'n'pixtrBYdkzkhisself2020
Written by dkzksaxxas_DanielX (DadaDoggyDannyKozakSaxfn)
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Author's Note
"Well, these blues, they hurt so bad, it turned my face to a permanent frown.
    Now I'm feelin' so much better, I can CAKE Walk into town."
from interpretation of a rather old-time tune covered by Taj Mahal, & lesser known & anonymous southern blues artists for over a century,
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