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Cold Spring Cleaning
I guess it wasn't worth that much
only a whispered sweet nothing
fading into thin air
just another broken promise or two
wouldn't make it worse
you never swept me off my feet
but you swept what was left of my faith
in you
off the floor
before walking all over it
don't forget your lies, dear.
only a whispered sweet nothing
fading into thin air
just another broken promise or two
wouldn't make it worse
you never swept me off my feet
but you swept what was left of my faith
in you
off the floor
before walking all over it
don't forget your lies, dear.
Published 11th Mar 2020
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11th Mar 2020 11:39am
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12th Mar 2020 4:01pm
Dear D,
Oh my how this one was felt around the world. The ache and frustration of lies and betrayal just makes me want to scream. You have again, captured this brilliantly in so few words as to make each one count twice! Excellent write and so well understood! H 🌷
Oh my how this one was felt around the world. The ache and frustration of lies and betrayal just makes me want to scream. You have again, captured this brilliantly in so few words as to make each one count twice! Excellent write and so well understood! H 🌷
13th Mar 2020 5:42pm
Thank you, as always, Honoria. ❤️
I do like my words sharp and stinging.
Delanee
I do like my words sharp and stinging.
Delanee
26th May 2020 9:01pm
"don't forget your lies, dear." -
Paradise regained in a few words. Brilliant! :-)
Paradise regained in a few words. Brilliant! :-)
17th Jun 2020 9:13am
Thank you so much for your appreciation. It's nice to return here after some time off and see my words still resonate with people.
🌻 Delanee.
🌻 Delanee.
1st Jul 2020 3:10am
I liked the way you approached this with confidence and understanding, it may have been difficult but it sounds like were pretty strong.
Great verse.
Great verse.
14th Jul 2020 9:02am
Thank you for this praise, wallyroo.
Perhaps I was a lot stronger than I realized at the time.
Delanee. 🌻
Perhaps I was a lot stronger than I realized at the time.
Delanee. 🌻
