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Time Capsule
my deaf ears hearing cryptic whispers
when night falls to silence false intentions
thunder echos another familiar storm
my confused mind replays sensual moments
rewinding the same luv scene over and over
nothing else to think about except for what was
my devastated heart is chained to some fantasy lie
it felt was rare amazing luv for eternity not an end
refusing expectance it’s devotion wasn’t enough
my crystal green eyes close for a repeated dream
behind eyelids they visualize purple blinking stars
silhouette’s dancing under dimmed moonlight
my intoxicated soul clutches a bottle of insanity
Angel’s send down compassionate rain kisses
praying I’ve not completely given up to face tomorrow
my dying spirit gives not a fight breathing
ready to pass out from drunkenness
escaping from the time capsule buried within me
Copyright © 2020 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
when night falls to silence false intentions
thunder echos another familiar storm
my confused mind replays sensual moments
rewinding the same luv scene over and over
nothing else to think about except for what was
my devastated heart is chained to some fantasy lie
it felt was rare amazing luv for eternity not an end
refusing expectance it’s devotion wasn’t enough
my crystal green eyes close for a repeated dream
behind eyelids they visualize purple blinking stars
silhouette’s dancing under dimmed moonlight
my intoxicated soul clutches a bottle of insanity
Angel’s send down compassionate rain kisses
praying I’ve not completely given up to face tomorrow
my dying spirit gives not a fight breathing
ready to pass out from drunkenness
escaping from the time capsule buried within me
Copyright © 2020 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
Published 8th Mar 2020
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8th Mar 2020 10:25am
Wow ... this is amazing ... stirred up such feeling ... carried me along ... had me reread and reread ... wonderful poeting ...
11th Mar 2020 00:59am
Hey Lil.......I’m humbly grateful for your response.......it’s encouraging when a Poetess such as you visits my ink.......hope it didn’t sadden you much......honored for RL......thank you.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
8th Mar 2020 10:28am
11th Mar 2020 1:01am
Hey PS.......thank you for gracing my ink with your words......thrilled you enjoyed.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
8th Mar 2020 11:46am
11th Mar 2020 1:02am
Hey Stoney.......sorry you can relate to this......I’m sure too many will........thank you......returning respect to you........purple luv & hugs xo :)
But yet it is in a good way for me it just reminds me of were I have been and gone in my life...
Respect dear poetess
Respect dear poetess
11th Mar 2020 1:24am
Oh I luv that.......your words are perfect way to think.......thank you for sharing them with me........you’re an intelligent soul 🌸
11th Mar 2020 1:29am
Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this subject for life will teach you things that you thought you never had to learn as you grow mentally and emotionally and physically and spiritually...respect dear poetess
11th Mar 2020 2:03am
11th Mar 2020 2:23pm
8th Mar 2020 5:23pm
my dying spirit gives not a fight breathing
ready to pass out from drunkenness
escaping from the time capsule buried within me
The time capsule buried within me! Wow! What a concept of truth—we all have time capsules within us. Beautifully done. FloweredOne! Much Love. xo
ready to pass out from drunkenness
escaping from the time capsule buried within me
The time capsule buried within me! Wow! What a concept of truth—we all have time capsules within us. Beautifully done. FloweredOne! Much Love. xo
11th Mar 2020 1:19am
Hey Ahavati.........this ink took me longer to write than any other.......I felt so many things in other souls lives and mine.......some in the past......some now.......I wanted every line to bring a feeling.......just as I felt every line......thank you for a brilliant response.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
8th Mar 2020 8:04pm
Wow....this is soooooooo achingly deep with deep-seeded dull but no less painful pain.
Superbly spilled
this emotion of memories and remembering
to the present.
Superbly spilled
this emotion of memories and remembering
to the present.
11th Mar 2020 1:22am
Hey Tallen.......I will admit this one took a bit out of me......it wasn’t written by just what I felt within me but also feeling others.......I know you understand how that is.......thank you.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
11th Mar 2020 6:54pm
i know Purple POWER Girl
we
You and me
empaths know all too well the impact and energies
contained within emotions
it sometimes feel as though it sucks to be us
but for me personally (& i believe You, as well)
i would not want to
BE
any other way.
we
You and me
empaths know all too well the impact and energies
contained within emotions
it sometimes feel as though it sucks to be us
but for me personally (& i believe You, as well)
i would not want to
BE
any other way.
16th Mar 2020 00:56am
Hey Tallen.......yes you’re right.......it’s a gift God gave us.......I hope it will always be to help others thru struggles.......thank you for your thoughts 🌸
8th Mar 2020 9:13pm
I found this to be a truly inspired write - it might have come from a pain-point but it has been redeemed in the sense of gifting the world with some wondrous words and phrasing.
11th Mar 2020 1:28am
Awe Josh.......I’m very honored by your words and thoughts you’ve left me.......I feel encouraged to keep on inking.......thank you.......honored by the RL........purple luv & hugs xo :)
8th Mar 2020 10:58pm
Among your best, flower. Your wording, and theme, move me more than I can say. Except one observation: Gorgeous work!
11th Mar 2020 1:36am
Hey Crow.......always happy to see you.......glad it moved you but hope not too sadly.......honored for the RL and sharing your thoughts with me.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
9th Mar 2020 6:47pm
11th Mar 2020 1:42am
Hey TIG........yes I’ve wrestled with my past......also feeling deep within myself and others.......I wish I could lift all the pain I feel and others......all I can do is ink it out and let them know their not alone........thank you.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
11th Mar 2020 1:39am
11th Mar 2020 2:05am
Hey Gin.......thank for smiling upon my ink.......glad you enjoyed it......purple luv & hugs xo :)
11th Mar 2020 2:50am
This is amazing, my dear Flowergirl, very expressive and meaningful. I love it.
Love
Jasmine
Love
Jasmine
16th Mar 2020 1:00am
Hey Rose........always a smile to see you upon my ink.......thank you for your graceful response......honored by the RL......purple luv & hugs xo :)
23rd Apr 2020 6:32am
Wonderful writing, The emotional wordings and sections reminds me of similar incorporations of my writings.
25th Apr 2020 3:57am
Hey SS.......thank you for smiling upon my ink........I’m glad you enjoyed........I read some of your lines before I answered this.......you do write with emotions and feelings.......will drop a few comments on your inks in time.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
25th Apr 2020 3:59am
