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I hope you fall
I’m,
Fine,
I feel fine
I’ll
Die
When I hit the ground
Until then
I’ll try
turning life around
Trial error
New era
Old terrors trembling distantly
hear them Louder closer I get
So i can
See you
Just one last time
Asking a lot for someone
Who abused living
One of my symptoms
Like pretending I’m not afraid
of normal life or opportunities
That came Looking for me
missing what I never had
I’m Coming down
Land where no ones around
Please run
Please run away
I can’t save you from my mistakes
Crash land
Look alive
If i survive
limp to you
When you see me
I hope you fall
what’ll happen first
See if you can land
Or laid backseat hearse
If you ask for help
If it’s convenient
Can you fall
Hit the ground
Get back up
With everything
bruised and broken
Find how hard it was
If life came crumbling down
So I can feel better
with my perspective
shared after all
When you see me
I hope you fall
When you see me
I hope you fall
Fine,
I feel fine
I’ll
Die
When I hit the ground
Until then
I’ll try
turning life around
Trial error
New era
Old terrors trembling distantly
hear them Louder closer I get
So i can
See you
Just one last time
Asking a lot for someone
Who abused living
One of my symptoms
Like pretending I’m not afraid
of normal life or opportunities
That came Looking for me
missing what I never had
I’m Coming down
Land where no ones around
Please run
Please run away
I can’t save you from my mistakes
Crash land
Look alive
If i survive
limp to you
When you see me
I hope you fall
what’ll happen first
See if you can land
Or laid backseat hearse
If you ask for help
If it’s convenient
Can you fall
Hit the ground
Get back up
With everything
bruised and broken
Find how hard it was
If life came crumbling down
So I can feel better
with my perspective
shared after all
When you see me
I hope you fall
When you see me
I hope you fall
Published 7th Mar 2020
Author's Note
About getting payback to people who wronged you by improving yourself
I wanted Using astronauts as a metaphor
For being up so high and doing great,
then coming down, be it drugs, alcohol, not responsible or stopped just trying
having people talk/think badly of you, and change your life around so you can show them you’re better now and that they couldn’t go through what you did.
I wanted Using astronauts as a metaphor
For being up so high and doing great,
then coming down, be it drugs, alcohol, not responsible or stopped just trying
having people talk/think badly of you, and change your life around so you can show them you’re better now and that they couldn’t go through what you did.
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