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dilettante
i am
not
(a)
writer!
healing & life-forms
touching
(a
just)
an empath
crawling thru life
in a backdrop
healing
life-forms
touching. . .
my Tao
becoming ~
awareness
kindness
love
*
If sharing
makes me to look
as
though
I am smarter then……..
(amen)
so be it. . .
I
am
a
writer. . .
not
(a)
writer!
healing & life-forms
touching
(a
just)
an empath
crawling thru life
in a backdrop
healing
life-forms
touching. . .
my Tao
becoming ~
awareness
kindness
love
*
If sharing
makes me to look
as
though
I am smarter then……..
(amen)
so be it. . .
I
am
a
writer. . .
Written by
Tallen
(earth_empath)
Published 5th Mar 2020
| Edited 6th Mar 2020
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Re. dilettante
5th Mar 2020 9:18pm
Ohhh snap! good'un!
This part snagged me:
touching
a
jJust ( is that a double J? )
an empath
Did you mean
touching
I'm
just
an empath?
This part snagged me:
touching
a
jJust ( is that a double J? )
an empath
Did you mean
touching
I'm
just
an empath?
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Re: Re. dilettante
5th Mar 2020 9:22pm
Re: Re. dilettante
5th Mar 2020 9:50pm
Re: Re. dilettante
5th Mar 2020 9:53pm
lol -- it was a FAT fingering of the cordless keyboard
as i was falling
backwards and trying to regain some sort of balance.
as i was falling
backwards and trying to regain some sort of balance.
Re: Re. dilettante
6th Mar 2020 10:40pm
Yes?
Haven't seen You around these parts for a while; welcome back.
appreciate the read and share
Haven't seen You around these parts for a while; welcome back.
appreciate the read and share
dilettante
Hey, Tallen
The visual simplicity of your dilettante belies its profundity in the same way that supposed amateurism or superficiality may conceal deftness and competence. If your simple words can heal the nation, then therein lies the claim of your fame.
After all, the Good Book says, “But God hath chosen the foolish things of the world to confound the wise; and God hath chosen the weak things of the world to confound the things which are mighty.” -- 1 Corinthians 1:27 (KJV).
You always find the unique words that create a stir among your readers.
Congratulations!
Sincerely
cab
The visual simplicity of your dilettante belies its profundity in the same way that supposed amateurism or superficiality may conceal deftness and competence. If your simple words can heal the nation, then therein lies the claim of your fame.
After all, the Good Book says, “But God hath chosen the foolish things of the world to confound the wise; and God hath chosen the weak things of the world to confound the things which are mighty.” -- 1 Corinthians 1:27 (KJV).
You always find the unique words that create a stir among your readers.
Congratulations!
Sincerely
cab
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Re: dilettante
6th Mar 2020 10:42pm
Your read and share ne'er fail to cause me to smile
(thank You)
i am all about simplifying life
makes lots of room for more play, opportunities for kind acts and hours spent stargazing.
(thank You)
i am all about simplifying life
makes lots of room for more play, opportunities for kind acts and hours spent stargazing.
Re. dilettante
Anonymous
10th Mar 2020 2:55pm
Interesting.
"healing & life-forms
touching
(a
just)
an empath
crawling thru life"
Was the "a just" meant to double as "adjust" ? Because that's how it reads to me - that life effects you and modifies your daily outcome.
"healing & life-forms
touching
(a
just)
an empath
crawling thru life"
Was the "a just" meant to double as "adjust" ? Because that's how it reads to me - that life effects you and modifies your daily outcome.
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Re: Re. dilettante
10th Mar 2020 4:44pm
(a
just) <<<--------Yes and know; for You, JB, Yes.
You are a sleuthing peruser of my ink
it's as if You are reading my heart and You hear my thoughts!!!
just) <<<--------Yes and know; for You, JB, Yes.
You are a sleuthing peruser of my ink
it's as if You are reading my heart and You hear my thoughts!!!
Re. dilettante
10th Mar 2020 11:24pm
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11th Mar 2020 6:51pm