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those last brave moments
when i am old
and
lying on my
death bed,
someone will
ask me...
and what did
you accomplish?
and I'm a weak
and broken voice
like a song bird
that has lost its
melody I will
answer...
I have honestly
loved a few
people.
wrote volumes
of mediocre
poetry.
and it made no
difference if that
love was returned
or those poems
we're ever read
by others
it was my love
to give away.
my words to
write.
what greater feat
is there than to
give and create.
with that said,
I will close
my eyes
and
end
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Re. those last brave moments
27th Feb 2020 11:22pm
Re: Re. those last brave moments
28th Feb 2020 00:35am
Thank you Ahvanti. Deeply, deeply, appreciated.
Hope all is good with you.
Pax,
buddhakitty.
Hope all is good with you.
Pax,
buddhakitty.
Re: Re. those last brave moments
28th Feb 2020 00:35am
Thank you Ahvanti. Deeply, deeply, appreciated.
Hope all is good with you.
Pax,
buddhakitty.
Hope all is good with you.
Pax,
buddhakitty.
Re. those last brave moments
27th Feb 2020 11:48pm
Doing things for their own sake is what will save the world. Love the way your poem expresses true vitality.
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28th Feb 2020 00:37am
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28th Feb 2020 8:20am
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Re. those last brave moments
28th Feb 2020 9:16am
Loved it! Very artistic and soulful. Much love to you! 😻👏👏👏👏👏🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
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Re: Re. those last brave moments
28th Feb 2020 11:03am
Re. those last brave moments
28th Feb 2020 2:30pm
to give & create..is there anything more nobler godlier motherlier than this...juz eternal is this- love ..& the arising art from this... light love & peace dear one x:)
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28th Feb 2020 10:42pm
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28th Feb 2020 10:44pm
Thank you so much Ely. I appreciate the kind words and the support you have shown me.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. those last brave moments
29th Feb 2020 2:47am
Dear BK,
My heart caught in my throat on this one. There’s never been anything mediocre regarding your poetry and that’s a fact. Top shelf all the way. This piece is beautiful and just about tore out my soul. So lovely. H🌷
My heart caught in my throat on this one. There’s never been anything mediocre regarding your poetry and that’s a fact. Top shelf all the way. This piece is beautiful and just about tore out my soul. So lovely. H🌷
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Re: Re. those last brave moments
29th Feb 2020 3:03am
Your praise does me an honor I do not deserve. I am humbled. Blessings to you.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.