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Writing Under The Influence
writing under the influence
is a new experience
for me
i can see why hemingway
was attached to
the daiquiri
my thoughts are
askew
adrift
offbeat
confused
filters gone
i say what i think
or what i feel
doesn’t matter
if its real
or ideal
i write
uninhibited
by rational thought
instead
recording
the unusual
(C)2020 Raibeart Bruis
is a new experience
for me
i can see why hemingway
was attached to
the daiquiri
my thoughts are
askew
adrift
offbeat
confused
filters gone
i say what i think
or what i feel
doesn’t matter
if its real
or ideal
i write
uninhibited
by rational thought
instead
recording
the unusual
(C)2020 Raibeart Bruis
Published 27th Feb 2020
Author's Note
A couple of pineapple daiquiris under my belt.
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28th Feb 2020 6:14am
Have all the drinks you want because it helps with poems. Keep on writing.
28th Feb 2020 3:19pm
