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I threw my heart out
https://youtube.com/watch?v=KOVyBhVsOV0
Please copy and listen while reading and as always thanks for looking :)
He just told me and I quote
”Just cause we fight doesn’t mean it’s over___”
to which I said,
Dear John,
being with you is like having a roommate
that’s never home, and for that reason
I’m gone! If you ever find your life
where you left it,
you’ll find me there too...
Published 25th Feb 2020
| Edited 6th Nov 2020
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Bravo, Jackie! Power of words indeed! The brevity of this is so effective, succinctly on point. However, I don't think you need that last line—you've already implied that's where you'll be. The final line is somewhat of an anti-climax.
* cough fin[d] me too cough *
* cough fin[d] me too cough *
Excellent Ava! I was so hoping you would notice this poem!
write on sister! I’m going to edit it right now :)
Yes, I am heading there, and it's okay because
for the first time I am in a healthy breakup because it’s me ! It’s me making the right move first, mama's. Thank you Ava, you always make me feel so .. um.. so valid!!
Woop woop ❤️🥰
Jackie xo
write on sister! I’m going to edit it right now :)
Yes, I am heading there, and it's okay because
for the first time I am in a healthy breakup because it’s me ! It’s me making the right move first, mama's. Thank you Ava, you always make me feel so .. um.. so valid!!
Woop woop ❤️🥰
Jackie xo
25th Feb 2020 10:18pm
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25th Feb 2020 10:02pm
26th Feb 2020 3:57pm
A new. you sweeps clean, Miz broom.
How delightfully succinct you have been
You are showing keen knack for paring away the excess...leaving the meat of the situation...hugs, Ely
How delightfully succinct you have been
You are showing keen knack for paring away the excess...leaving the meat of the situation...hugs, Ely
29th Feb 2020 7:02pm
28th Feb 2020 6:36pm
Wow. Power in your brevity here and your song choices are also very poignant.
29th Feb 2020 7:03pm
13th Mar 2020 2:04am
The Buddha said...It is better to walk alone than in the company of a fool. Powerful realization Jackie.
Peace...Harry
Peace...Harry
14th Mar 2020 11:19pm
Yes it’s not in my script..
So happy you’re home my dear dear friend
(((((((. Harry ))))))))))))❤️
Love
Jackie xo
So happy you’re home my dear dear friend
(((((((. Harry ))))))))))))❤️
Love
Jackie xo
