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No End To Demand More Than Friend
Microanalytical Hypercritical Indivisible Individual
Unequivocal Impermissible Unforgivable Criminal
Stealing Emotion In Motion Acts Of Sin And Devotion
Implosion Outspoken Interwoven Yet Heart Broken
And You Come To Me Begging Me To Set You Free
Black Sea Of Debris I Decree You Are Dead To Me
Spurning Hands Demand Turning Of Command Key
Guarantee We Shall Disagree Relationship Wannabee
Unequivocal Impermissible Unforgivable Criminal
Stealing Emotion In Motion Acts Of Sin And Devotion
Implosion Outspoken Interwoven Yet Heart Broken
And You Come To Me Begging Me To Set You Free
Black Sea Of Debris I Decree You Are Dead To Me
Spurning Hands Demand Turning Of Command Key
Guarantee We Shall Disagree Relationship Wannabee
Published 23rd Feb 2020
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24th Feb 2020 00:17am
24th Feb 2020 00:20am
Always a pleasure to find the words to touch
the hearts of all those who are caught , trapped ,
or experiencing the pains of emotion...
May we all find healing...;)
the hearts of all those who are caught , trapped ,
or experiencing the pains of emotion...
May we all find healing...;)
24th Feb 2020 00:32am
24th Feb 2020 00:39am
Some people beg to be released ,
when they already are...
They just can't see that is the case...
And that , for me at least...is truth...
Best to you , Whipped
when they already are...
They just can't see that is the case...
And that , for me at least...is truth...
Best to you , Whipped
24th Feb 2020 1:36am
This one has some real teeth to it Blackwolf. Strong write.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
24th Feb 2020 1:43am
I remember so well breaking up , after relationships...
And the hurt , and pain , yet the need and determination...
We must hold to our truths !
Thank you my friend...;)
And the hurt , and pain , yet the need and determination...
We must hold to our truths !
Thank you my friend...;)
24th Feb 2020 11:33am
i love this i want to put it into one of my verses (im a rapper/singer) let me know if youd like to collaborate because the freestyler in me began to flow on top of this as if i had written the beggining. #kindredspirit
24th Feb 2020 5:24pm
Would be open to work together ,
and feel honored in doing so , my
friend...let us speak about this via
messages ;
I have had a few poets / rappers
comment on my work before here ;
I have almost 600 poems , of which
about one hundred could be used in
rap songs...send me what you are thinking...
And thank you for your interest , and comment !
and feel honored in doing so , my
friend...let us speak about this via
messages ;
I have had a few poets / rappers
comment on my work before here ;
I have almost 600 poems , of which
about one hundred could be used in
rap songs...send me what you are thinking...
And thank you for your interest , and comment !
