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Disturbance In the Night (Sonnet)
Disturbance in the Night
by ~UnleashedHeathen
Be nice to the old lady in the shoe
Why not,you ask me? I ask why not,instead
Because in return she`ll be cruel to you
You see,her young son had just lost his head
It`s sad because he was just newly wed
When he returned, he was caught by surprise
While he and his wife were sleeping in bed
By the attack that was based off of lies
Once his were opened, their eyes immediately met
He was told to get up and move swiftly
First he was startled, but was told not to fret
Feeling generous, he killed the man quickly
His smile was smile as he began to smirk
The killer was pleased he`d finished his work
by ~UnleashedHeathen
Be nice to the old lady in the shoe
Why not,you ask me? I ask why not,instead
Because in return she`ll be cruel to you
You see,her young son had just lost his head
It`s sad because he was just newly wed
When he returned, he was caught by surprise
While he and his wife were sleeping in bed
By the attack that was based off of lies
Once his were opened, their eyes immediately met
He was told to get up and move swiftly
First he was startled, but was told not to fret
Feeling generous, he killed the man quickly
His smile was smile as he began to smirk
The killer was pleased he`d finished his work
Published 6th Jan 2012
| Edited 7th Jan 2012
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Anonymous
27th Aug 2012 7:38pm
Thank you for sharing your work. I hope this is well taken but should the second line read "Why, you ask me? I ask why not,instead " instead of "Why not,you ask me? I ask why not,instead". Also I am not sure I understand "His smile was smile as he began to smirk". Thank you again for sharing.
