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22nd Feb 2020 6:48pm
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22nd Feb 2020 10:30pm
Another captivating exploration of a particular dynamic.
"Hairs I never knew I had:
When they are raised, I know I'm bad"
Really impressed how that line informs the whole.
"Hairs I never knew I had:
When they are raised, I know I'm bad"
Really impressed how that line informs the whole.
24th Feb 2020 6:48am
Whipping you with the blast of lengthy discourse can certainly be punitive. Provocative and fine writing. Ouch!
24th Feb 2020 6:49am
sometimes the pain words
give rise to is more hurtful
than whippiest whips
give rise to is more hurtful
than whippiest whips
13th Mar 2020 9:26pm
This is my new favorite of yours my darling. This is what great Sub/Dom poetry is all about. It has humor fantastic description with clever twists of soliloquy and all in-between. I am more than greatly turned on to speak plainly. You really excel at your craft and this blew me away.
XoXoXo
John
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John
18th Mar 2020 6:34pm
