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Ten Part Dragnet
One Must Refresh The Enmeshed
Caught In Verbal Mind Blind Nets
Reset No Upset Subset Alphabets
Words In Schism On The Internet
Just Mental Assets I Can Not Regret
A Simple Request I Will Not Forget
I Collect All I Do Not Reject Suspect
Just Intellect Except I Expect Intent
To Prevent Pretext You In Cold Sweat
No Threat Rhyme I Beget No Not Yet
Caught In Verbal Mind Blind Nets
Reset No Upset Subset Alphabets
Words In Schism On The Internet
Just Mental Assets I Can Not Regret
A Simple Request I Will Not Forget
I Collect All I Do Not Reject Suspect
Just Intellect Except I Expect Intent
To Prevent Pretext You In Cold Sweat
No Threat Rhyme I Beget No Not Yet
Published 21st Feb 2020
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21st Feb 2020 9:19pm
This one has such power ... the cadence is relentless ... crisp words ... love all the "t"s ... bravo Lupe Noir ...
21st Feb 2020 9:23pm
Many thanks , my sweet and powerful Poetic soul friend !
I must admit...that was the fastest comment I
have ever received after publishing a poem here !
You rock !
I must admit...that was the fastest comment I
have ever received after publishing a poem here !
You rock !
21st Feb 2020 9:25pm
Well you are most welcome ... I saw your avatar (don't get paranoid) ... checked out your latest poem ... after recovering from being blown away ... I jotted down a comment ...
21st Feb 2020 10:08pm
21st Feb 2020 11:04pm
You are truly , and always a torch
when you speak my friend !
You , yourself know how to weave the words...
We speak as we see it...
I just wish you always , the better and best in life !
when you speak my friend !
You , yourself know how to weave the words...
We speak as we see it...
I just wish you always , the better and best in life !
21st Feb 2020 11:02pm
Bwolf... I guess you know it already.
I like your uniqueness
Flow so incredibly,
You are such a master of your style.
You bring such fire to the screen.
I like your uniqueness
Flow so incredibly,
You are such a master of your style.
You bring such fire to the screen.
21st Feb 2020 11:07pm
Thank you , Mi'Lady , and Friend...
And many thanks for this :
"fire to the screen"
If I may that is going in a poem...
And many thanks for this :
"fire to the screen"
If I may that is going in a poem...
21st Feb 2020 11:18pm
22nd Feb 2020 1:45am
Flow like wine, hit like a stone. Strong write Blackwolf.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
22nd Feb 2020 2:18am
You are such a stalwart friend , Buddha Kitty ;
Please understand you are highly valued ,
and if you ever need to comment other
than positive , you can be sure you shall
have as attentive an ear as with your most
positive and supporting statements...:)
Please understand you are highly valued ,
and if you ever need to comment other
than positive , you can be sure you shall
have as attentive an ear as with your most
positive and supporting statements...:)
22nd Feb 2020 2:24am
Thank you Blackwolf. I do so admire your honesty and candour here on DUP.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
