[ Spiritual ] Sur ▪ render

Sir Knight,  
it feels so good to erase the †  
heroically tragic †  
( or perhaps  
tragically heroic †)  
Past †
where the iron of Trust † †
oxidizes if one lingers too long †
There is no coming back †
from the ravaging cancer †
dissed rust is †
lest it firstly consume †  
your armor and sword †  
rendering you exposed †
naked upon the battlefield †
laying down your arms †
in complete surrender †
to the moment †
Written by JohnnyBlaze
Published | Edited 18th May 2020
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