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Harsh Critique

My verses make the closed-minded wish they could itch their brainstem because
The masses fail to comprehend and act as if
Theyíve been infected by some chemical agent
Another consequence of Mind Body Spirit Independence and
The endowment to express
The ongoing photosynthesis
Minus Religious Affiliation
Social Awareness is useless
When promoted to a public not interested
In any subject other than the fulfillment of vices or
The latest gadgets
Created to perpetuate a World Conscious
Connected by force-fed computer-generated images
Meant to deaden your senses
While the same companies that sell and advertise them
Rape the planet of its natural resources for the
Three Percentís long term benefits
Donít make the rich
Then question the growing distance
DaddyPhantom
Written by DaddyPhantom (DaddyPhantomPhotoTron)
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Author's Note
I never tried to be a prophet, but the lyrics are often prophetic. I wrote this when there were only two or three social media platforms to choose from. Who would have thought we as a society would...
I never tried to be a prophet, but the lyrics are often prophetic. I wrote this when there were only two or three social media platforms to choose from. Who would have thought we as a society would have gone this far that soon?
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