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Harsh Critique
My verses make the closed-minded wish they could itch their brainstem because
The masses fail to comprehend and act as if
They’ve been infected by some chemical agent
Another consequence of Mind Body Spirit Independence and
The endowment to express
The ongoing photosynthesis
Minus Religious Affiliation
Social Awareness is useless
When promoted to a public not interested
In any subject other than the fulfillment of vices or
The latest gadgets
Created to perpetuate a World Conscious
Connected by force-fed computer-generated images
Meant to deaden your senses
While the same companies that sell and advertise them
Rape the planet of its natural resources for the
Three Percent’s long term benefits
Don’t make the rich
Then question the growing distance
The masses fail to comprehend and act as if
They’ve been infected by some chemical agent
Another consequence of Mind Body Spirit Independence and
The endowment to express
The ongoing photosynthesis
Minus Religious Affiliation
Social Awareness is useless
When promoted to a public not interested
In any subject other than the fulfillment of vices or
The latest gadgets
Created to perpetuate a World Conscious
Connected by force-fed computer-generated images
Meant to deaden your senses
While the same companies that sell and advertise them
Rape the planet of its natural resources for the
Three Percent’s long term benefits
Don’t make the rich
Then question the growing distance
Published 17th Feb 2020
Author's Note
I never tried to be a prophet, but the lyrics are often prophetic. I wrote this when there were only two or three social media platforms to choose from. Who would have thought we as a society would have gone this far that soon?
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25th Feb 2020 6:59am
25th Apr 2020 00:48am
Poets are deeply intuitive people some of us are able to tap in to a higher conscious,Gamma We are the producer, director, and actor . I only have been writing for two years and amazed what comes out. Keep on writing prophetically.
