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CHOPPED………………. REDEMPTION

After being chopped you decided to come back with a vengeance
You decided to show that you had perfected your craft of
Sensual manipulation
Being confident in your skills
You decide to turn the tables around
This time
You started with
DESSERT
You started at my feet
Messaging the bottom of the soles of my feet
Concentrating only on my erogenous zones
As you messaged my toes with your mouth
Using your tongue to provide erotic vibrations from my feet to
The deepest concepts of my mind
You continued your manipulation as my body squirmed in sheer
Delight
Stimulating the mental of what was next to come
MAIN COURSE
You massaged my body taking extra care to
Massage those areas that most WOMEN complain about
But most MEN neglect to touch
Working on my shoulders and my neck
While whispering words in my ear that
Was in line with the dessert
Sending my mental into a state
Of SEXUAL BLISS
Causing my PEARL to swell in size
While my clit was pulsating with the
Exciting beats of my heart
To top it off with
An
Appetizer
Of messaging my scalp
All the while speaking those wonderful
Sweet Nothings in my ear
To get the juices bubbling deep within
My volcano
Using your massaging technique
To caress my
Eyelids
My forehead
Down to my cheeks
Ending with a long slow passionate
Kiss
While grabbing my
Ass
As the juices in my volcano
Explode
Showing that your techniques
Qualified you as the New
Winner of
Chopped
Redemption
Written by micki49 (Alicia Young)
Published
Author's Note
Just becomes the first time isn't what you expected, you can always REDEEM yourself
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