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10 years
So it has come.
The day that marks 10 years since your death. Today your bother and I came to visit you and brought you 2 red roses.
We laughed and joked today in light of the circumstances, we figured you were probably tired of seeing the sadness in the faces of those who come to visit you.
If only... if only ... if only...
I could say if only this or if only that till the day I die but wishing anything was different isn’t going to change anything.
I’ll only say this And that’s where I’ll leave it.
You were a flawed person, a wonderfully sweet, funny, dorky, clumsy flawed person.
I am honored to have known you, thank you for everything, I love you.
Rest in peace
The day that marks 10 years since your death. Today your bother and I came to visit you and brought you 2 red roses.
We laughed and joked today in light of the circumstances, we figured you were probably tired of seeing the sadness in the faces of those who come to visit you.
If only... if only ... if only...
I could say if only this or if only that till the day I die but wishing anything was different isn’t going to change anything.
I’ll only say this And that’s where I’ll leave it.
You were a flawed person, a wonderfully sweet, funny, dorky, clumsy flawed person.
I am honored to have known you, thank you for everything, I love you.
Rest in peace
Published 16th Feb 2020
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14th May 2020 6:03pm
beautiful words You write Scarybutnotscared, .. I see the dead, .. it's not scary like in movies, .. is a calm world, the other side, .. but your belief in my sight is not expected, .. although, .. I think you see too, ... somehow, .. I get that vib, .. perhaps not the dead, .. but You (see)
18th Jul 2020 2:00am
The honesty and vulnerability of this are touching and relatable.
I would be thrilled if you would send an audio reading of this to the site's podcast, The Poetcast Project. I think people would benefit from hearing this and the feature may draw interest to your writing on site. If you would be interested, please send an mp3 or mp4, including your screen name and the poem's title, to:
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Member participation is the life's blood of the podcast, so I hope you will consider it.
In kindness,
Daniel
I would be thrilled if you would send an audio reading of this to the site's podcast, The Poetcast Project. I think people would benefit from hearing this and the feature may draw interest to your writing on site. If you would be interested, please send an mp3 or mp4, including your screen name and the poem's title, to:
undergroundoutloud@outlook.com
Member participation is the life's blood of the podcast, so I hope you will consider it.
In kindness,
Daniel
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12th Jun 2021 9:07pm
"You were a flawed person, a wonderfully sweet, funny, dorky, clumsy flawed person.
I am honored to have known you, thank you for everything, I love you."
"Rest in peace"
Very well written from the heart , my friend...
Those words would truly bless a soul in the
journey to the Otherside...with that wish , and
will force behind it , you have blessed them with
safe passage , and acknowledgement...
THAT is a true friend
I am honored to have known you, thank you for everything, I love you."
"Rest in peace"
Very well written from the heart , my friend...
Those words would truly bless a soul in the
journey to the Otherside...with that wish , and
will force behind it , you have blessed them with
safe passage , and acknowledgement...
THAT is a true friend
