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No Bones About It

 
True—I suppose
 
it would be a bit heavy-
 
handed with pen at the ready
 
pressed against chest, emphasizing
 
how your poetry punctuates! my lungs
 
dotting these   s   i   g   h   s   of mine
 
leaving me so  b r e a t h l e s s . . .
 
but what if such a thing was

proposed literarily by a
 
poem being purpose-
 
fully shaped like a
 
ribcage, eh ..?


JohnnyBlaze
Written by JohnnyBlaze
Published | Edited 14th Feb 2020
Author's Note
with Love for my Best Friend Forever
on this Valentines Day 👫❤📝

Please check out her Punctuation Workshop @
with Love for my Best Friend Forever
on this Valentines Day 👫❤📝

Please check out her Punctuation Workshop @
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/workshop/read/11235/
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