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A Passionate Storm
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All men are liable to error; and most men are, in many points, by passion or interest, under temptation to it.
John Locke
John Locke
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Re. A Passionate Storm
11th Feb 2020 4:38am
Fun read. The context was great and so erotic, but I love the way the words flow in the photo. Good job.
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Re: Re. A Passionate Storm
11th Feb 2020 5:02pm
Well thank you sincerely and I am honored you found my pictorial musing up to your mental standards, and thank you for scribbling on my canvas with an encouraging comment, do enjoy your day my poet and wishing you a great evening as it unfolds
Re. A Passionate Storm
The photo is damn in a good way. The poem was very suggestive of sex and very good read. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. A Passionate Storm
11th Feb 2020 5:04pm
What a nice comment...and this poetess will take it...thank you so much for reading and hoping you have a blissful day and a nice evening my poet
Re. A Passionate Storm
Anonymous
11th Feb 2020 8:45am
There is always calm after a storm my love but, then we work up another, every time we can. 😘
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Re: Re. A Passionate Storm
11th Feb 2020 4:32pm
Mm...oh yes we can my love.. with your handsome self.. and those eyes.. umm... weakens me...thank you for reading me... have a blessed day handsome man
Re. A Passionate Storm
12th Feb 2020 00:53am
Re: Re. A Passionate Storm
23rd Feb 2020 8:13pm
Such a nice comment and very much appreciated my poet, in essence, thank you for reading. Have a blessed day and a great upcoming week as well