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First Haiku attempt in a bit
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First Haiku attempt in a bit
vibrations go wild-
aimless yet so very honed
on the eternal edge
Written by
Hunterapsych
(Shaman among machines)
Published
11th Feb 2020
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Haiku experts help is this right?!
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Re. First Haiku attempt in a bit
nikkimoe
11th Feb 2020 1:39am
Its a haiku to me lol
but I dont know any poetry rules. 😂
I enjoyed it. ❤
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Re: Re. First Haiku attempt in a bit
Hunterapsych
(Shaman among machines)
13th Feb 2020 1:19am
Haha same! Idk shit
Thanks so much though 🙏 glad you enjoyed!
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- Edited 8th May 2021 11:45am
11th Feb 2020 4:25pm
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Re: Re. First Haiku attempt in a bit
Hunterapsych
(Shaman among machines)
13th Feb 2020 1:22am
Much appreciation for reading and commenting! 🙏 Thanks for informing me!
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