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Not Done
You really want to know whats in my head
Most are dead and the rest are barley fed
Say something if you want to be the one that's next
Because I could give fuck less
I lost my soul in the darkness
So walk in the house where I am locked in
Doctors still trying to figure out what made me snap
They don't believe me when I try to explain its my past
Sometimes I just want to grab their skull and squeeze till it cracks
Because they don't know about the road I traveled
No help, see so many people come and go.. I feel like an animal
But I am still living.....
I'm not proud of it.... but I feel like I have a piece missing
Most are dead and the rest are barley fed
Say something if you want to be the one that's next
Because I could give fuck less
I lost my soul in the darkness
So walk in the house where I am locked in
Doctors still trying to figure out what made me snap
They don't believe me when I try to explain its my past
Sometimes I just want to grab their skull and squeeze till it cracks
Because they don't know about the road I traveled
No help, see so many people come and go.. I feel like an animal
But I am still living.....
I'm not proud of it.... but I feel like I have a piece missing
Published 5th Jan 2012
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5th Jan 2012 9:17am
Some of us loose a piece everyday. I live in the past for it is all that I have. I can relate to how you feel. I have the same issues. Great way of getting it out there. Made me seem as if I was looking into a mirror. Excellent write
6th Jan 2012 5:03am
24th Feb 2012 6:22pm
I can relate to this. You must remember though it is that past that makes us who we are in the present. Like the way you released feelings here. Gail
30th Jul 2012 3:48am
flighty in parts but a good read. solid flow, nice setting n sense of emotion...
