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that single moment
words pass between
us
some are dust,
other ashes
foreheads rubbed in
confusion and
frustration
standing there
aware of that odd,
heavy silence
numbing
us
--love--
we couldn't quite
figure it
out,
could
we
Published 6th Feb 2020
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6th Feb 2020 3:19am
Those are the best moments
seconds in time but in the mind,
everlasting and leave us always wondering if there should have been more or we had just enough.
seconds in time but in the mind,
everlasting and leave us always wondering if there should have been more or we had just enough.
6th Feb 2020 3:54pm
Yeah, i get that. It's certainly a moment that can jar you.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
6th Feb 2020 3:38pm
You captured well that knowing in the silence, what needs not be spoken to be heard. Left asunder.
6th Feb 2020 3:53pm
I dread that moment when the truth becomes as clear as a new sunrise.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
7th Feb 2020 10:59am
Dear BK,
Breathless by this write and your response to nightbirdblue. That’s another poem right there.
This piece is so relatable it has its own heartbeat.
“aware of that odd,
heavy silence
numbing
us
--love--
we couldn't quite
figure it
out, ” gorgeous!
Fantastic write and loved the format. H🌷
Breathless by this write and your response to nightbirdblue. That’s another poem right there.
This piece is so relatable it has its own heartbeat.
“aware of that odd,
heavy silence
numbing
us
--love--
we couldn't quite
figure it
out, ” gorgeous!
Fantastic write and loved the format. H🌷
7th Feb 2020 11:03am
Thank you Honoria. The kind word's are appreciated.
Hope all is good in your world.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Hope all is good in your world.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
