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Perfectionist Assholes
Perfectionist assholes
We are:
Everything has its place
We refused to get dirty
But getting dirty
With a hot woman
Is a beautiful thing
We are:
Everything has its place
We refused to get dirty
But getting dirty
With a hot woman
Is a beautiful thing
Published 5th Feb 2020
Author's Note
I was try to be raunchy and sexual because I can the men in my family assholes
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5th Feb 2020 8:08pm
It's nice how much you care. I am not a huge fan of this one because you have done better but it's simple. It's a good take on the mind of some men but I feel could have been expored more.
5th Feb 2020 8:14pm
5th Feb 2020 8:13pm
5th Feb 2020 8:16pm
Of course, when we had a word war going on you showed you have a way with with words and even though you sometimes just start with the dirty when I put it into a different perspective you understand it. Women are lovely creatures but yet they cause heartbreak. Use your own experience to create your masterpiece.
5th Feb 2020 8:18pm
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