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Plants
What is a flower
What does it mean to take a cold shower
Moments lost as if in a tower
Going to ground to gain power
Petals of love always fly by
Roots always die
Tell me who am I
Simple photosynthesis I apply
Rain gives me endless joy
I feel just like a little boy
Don't play with me and act coy
Lying in the dirt simple things of soy
What does it mean to take a cold shower
Moments lost as if in a tower
Going to ground to gain power
Petals of love always fly by
Roots always die
Tell me who am I
Simple photosynthesis I apply
Rain gives me endless joy
I feel just like a little boy
Don't play with me and act coy
Lying in the dirt simple things of soy
Published 5th Feb 2020
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5th Feb 2020 6:33am
I like the mystery of this, growing plants and power plants, and the questions asked, this is a powerful question in a poem, 'Tell me who am I' ..
5th Feb 2020 6:37am
It was all about being a plant. That was the purpose. So simple but yet so unique.
5th Feb 2020 7:14am
It's the mystery of growing plants and seeing the hybirds that come from the original. This poem is also life and the mysteries thatvcome along with it. This has me thinking about my own life. Keep on writing.
5th Feb 2020 7:16am
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5th Feb 2020 8:28am
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5th Feb 2020 11:44pm
That first line was a nice taste of existentialism. You did a good job with this one. Are you familiar with the song "Wish You Were Here", by Pink Floyd?
16th Feb 2020 6:18pm
