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DO NOT RESUSCITATE
Published 4th Feb 2020
Author's Note
Inspired by Stevie Smith's poem 'To the Tune of the Coventry Carol.'
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4th Feb 2020 12:10pm
beautifully composed love the truth that flows through these words of an romantic love encounter bless by the heavens entwine by souls falling in love...respect my friend
5th Feb 2020 00:44am
Amusing entry, SnuggleB! It's as if you were striving for the opposite of Smith's poem that inspired it. She warns everyone to stay away from falling in love and you warn everyone away from reviving you from your love coma. I admit to having help from Ahavati to make the connection. Good luckmin the comp!
5th Feb 2020 00:48am
Yep! The essence of one is to avoid love ( after the fact, of course ); the other is to avoid life ( after the fact, of course ). Well done, snuggle! Best of luck in the comp!
9th Feb 2020 00:31am
Nicely done Snugglebuck. I really like the way your presented this, as a warning, grabbing everyone's attention.
Good luck in the comp.
Good luck in the comp.
