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The Paradox of Love
The Paradox of Love
My mind plays tricks
On this love i have kept
A susurrous wimper
came along with its fears
Like a withered leaf
Falling from a tree
Our love died down
As i yearn to be free.
My heart beats
in a cleaŕ interlude
As our meandering journey
Have come to its close
Growth receeds
Whilst it reckons a hope
This flame died down
And emptiness became our very prologue
Your serpentine embrace
I will surely hold
Unto this mind where i kept you most
I shall love you within this reel
Till all feelings subside
And i became free
From the shackles of your love
That burried me.
(C)mai1.26.20
My mind plays tricks
On this love i have kept
A susurrous wimper
came along with its fears
Like a withered leaf
Falling from a tree
Our love died down
As i yearn to be free.
My heart beats
in a cleaŕ interlude
As our meandering journey
Have come to its close
Growth receeds
Whilst it reckons a hope
This flame died down
And emptiness became our very prologue
Your serpentine embrace
I will surely hold
Unto this mind where i kept you most
I shall love you within this reel
Till all feelings subside
And i became free
From the shackles of your love
That burried me.
(C)mai1.26.20
Published 26th Jan 2020
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26th Jan 2020 3:22pm
Love the word susurous ( two r's btw - susurrous* )! I haven't seen that used in poetry that I can remember, well done.
We all come to terms with our past eventually. We grow and absorb when we accept and move on.
We all come to terms with our past eventually. We grow and absorb when we accept and move on.
26th Jan 2020 3:31pm
OmG i missed that one, Lolz! Thanks for pointing that out. . Well yeah its old because i am old too Lolz.
Yeah and the hardest to deal with are the pain that just never heals. Thank you @Ahavati. Xxx
Yeah and the hardest to deal with are the pain that just never heals. Thank you @Ahavati. Xxx
26th Jan 2020 3:34pm
I do it all the time! Thank goodness for automatic spell-checkers, and that I'm not colorblind and see the red line!
26th Jan 2020 4:05pm
I wish phones have those features too lolz. I am far comfortable working in this phone.
26th Jan 2020 4:01pm
26th Jan 2020 4:03pm
Thank you SweetOblivion! Jurrasic words comes out when the one writing is just as old lolz. Have a great weekend 💐💐💐
26th Jan 2020 4:07pm
26th Jan 2020 4:28pm
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- Edited 29th Apr 2020 5:45pm
26th Jan 2020 7:10pm
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26th Jan 2020 8:06pm
