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Pale Fog
In a pale fog
That hangs on the edge
Of no todays no tomorrows
Where Midnight sits
Weightless for a stint
Silent and calm in sweet repose
Comes a perfect peace
Baptized in the dark
Without song or a witness
Known to no one
But me and the fog
For a moment weightless and content
That hangs on the edge
Of no todays no tomorrows
Where Midnight sits
Weightless for a stint
Silent and calm in sweet repose
Comes a perfect peace
Baptized in the dark
Without song or a witness
Known to no one
But me and the fog
For a moment weightless and content
Published 25th Jan 2020
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26th Jan 2020 2:50am
Dear V,
Your poem is really lovely. For me, this evoked the deep quiet and solitude of midnight when darkness covers the earth with its blanket of silk and warms the soul to cope with another day.
“Known to no one
But me and the fog
For a moment weightless and content” for that one brief moment when one has no cares or worries. Lovely write. H🌷
Your poem is really lovely. For me, this evoked the deep quiet and solitude of midnight when darkness covers the earth with its blanket of silk and warms the soul to cope with another day.
“Known to no one
But me and the fog
For a moment weightless and content” for that one brief moment when one has no cares or worries. Lovely write. H🌷
26th Jan 2020 5:37am
