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Shell Seeker
I walked barefoot in a ribbon of sand as I seek Junonia shells along the shore of Sanibel Island. Gently placed
in a clam bucket that swings from my hand,
humming a tune I heard from earlier that afternoon.
in a clam bucket that swings from my hand,
humming a tune I heard from earlier that afternoon.
Published 25th Jan 2020
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25th Jan 2020 6:23am
i find comfort in the shell seeker
that would be wonderful to swing a bucket in the salty air
that would be wonderful to swing a bucket in the salty air
28th Jan 2020 6:24am
25th Jan 2020 11:10am
this is lovely and says so much about this moment with such sweet brevity
28th Jan 2020 6:26am
You are just as lovely my dear. Thank you for the kindness of your words.
Always✌💜
Always✌💜
25th Jan 2020 5:34pm
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26th Jan 2020 10:56pm
The brevity of the piece has a kind of zen magnification of it's details, which come across with clarity and emphasis. A lovely oasis amidst the heavier subjects I traverse. 💖 Nice bit of organic rhyme as well.
28th Jan 2020 6:35am
Thank you my dear poet! I love your ability to break a poem down to its core and relay the essence of its quality. I am trying and you are helping me. I appreciate your kindness. Always✌
Anonymous
27th Jan 2020 8:51am
Beautiful imagery painted by your words
28th Jan 2020 6:36am
10th Jul 2021 4:11pm
Your poem expresses a tranquil happy moment in your life. I can feel the sand at your feet and the sun on your skin.
10th Jul 2021 4:17pm
Thank you. I haven’t been on here for a year. It’s nice to see your kind comment.
Elizabeth
Elizabeth
