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Lonely
I'm a girl.
I feel things,
Guys don't usually understand.
I'm not distant.
I need you close.
Why won't you take my hand?
I'm not needy.
But I won't restrain.
Please catch me if you can.
I'm just a girl.
I get lonely.
Why won't you be my man?
I feel things,
Guys don't usually understand.
I'm not distant.
I need you close.
Why won't you take my hand?
I'm not needy.
But I won't restrain.
Please catch me if you can.
I'm just a girl.
I get lonely.
Why won't you be my man?
Published 24th Jan 2020
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- Edited 29th Apr 2020 5:45pm
24th Jan 2020 8:51am
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24th Jan 2020 4:08pm
14th Jun 2024 00:27am
Well I do like you as a person through DUP. Maybe we would hit it off real well if we met face to face. Your poems are clever & super creative. This one though I felt some truth & sadness in this piece.
Peace to you
ASD
xo
Peace to you
ASD
xo
14th Jun 2024 12:30pm
Guys often forget to show their feelings because it's viewed as weakness to other guys. It feels quite lonely if you don't show your feelings to a girl
14th Jun 2024 12:31pm
14th Jun 2024 12:34pm
