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Forms Of Pleasure
There is kindness
in each stroke
that informs
the lengthening
A reverence for the rising
of hidden splendours
that can touch
preferred gateways
Acute appraisals
only inform
the enchantment
of swells
and seasonings.
in each stroke
that informs
the lengthening
A reverence for the rising
of hidden splendours
that can touch
preferred gateways
Acute appraisals
only inform
the enchantment
of swells
and seasonings.
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Re. Forms Of Pleasure
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21st Jan 2020 1:36pm
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21st Jan 2020 3:36pm
Re. Forms Of Pleasure
21st Jan 2020 11:04pm
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22nd Jan 2020 00:41am
A phenomenal tongue twisting of varying degrees. That is preferential seasoning indeed.
Re. Forms Of Pleasure
22nd Jan 2020 8:47am
It is always nice
To flavour the days and nights
Of those one quite likes
To flavour the days and nights
Of those one quite likes
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Re: Re. Forms Of Pleasure
22nd Jan 2020 12:54pm
And with generosity of praise
through racing thoughts of haze
one stiffens in such glaze
through racing thoughts of haze
one stiffens in such glaze
Re: Re. Forms Of Pleasure
24th Jan 2020 5:43pm
I read your hidden
splendours as spiders and then
was caught in your web
splendours as spiders and then
was caught in your web
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24th Jan 2020 10:49pm
Re: Re. Forms Of Pleasure
24th Jan 2020 11:25pm
flies will be undone,
and so sticky, fly paper
will feel quite conquered
and so sticky, fly paper
will feel quite conquered
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Re. Forms Of Pleasure
23rd Jan 2020 11:34am
i find that i tend to read as little erotica as possible these days... unsure whether i'm just jaded with the topic or if the writing in general has just become so base & unimaginative that i feel i lose brain cells just reading the bloody title.
this really is a breath of sensual air... subtle & lyrical... a suggestion rather than a blatant show of pump & dump.
in the list it goes :)
this really is a breath of sensual air... subtle & lyrical... a suggestion rather than a blatant show of pump & dump.
in the list it goes :)
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Re: Re. Forms Of Pleasure
23rd Jan 2020 12:54pm
So glad I've been able to make it compelling for you, given the lack of interest in the usual fare. It means a lot to know that I am not delivering the standard fare. This comment is cherished and I will try to keep such writings on a similar track.