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Public Submission

She was expressing a little concern
It seems foreplay was never long enough
     So I got a new toy that I thought she might enjoy
It's amazing what we do when we're in love

The next day we went to the mall together
I thought it would be a great time to wear it
     completely straddled around my jewels and in my anal
     ready the remote, I was ready to go
I wondered what she'd say when I share it

When we arrived, I looked into her eyes
and gave her the little black control
     I explained what it was and everything it does
     It has a different vibration with each hit of the button
and how I'd be at her mercy as we stroll

At first she was surprised, then she smiled
and didn't hesitate to start using it
      Let the foreplay begin, it was a great sensation
as I walked in the midst strangers feeling it
    
Fast and hard, slow and soft,
and heartbeat vibrations filled my spot
      We'd walk in a store and she would do it more
      She was having fun with my public submission
I could see the experience was getting her hot

When we left, she played with it
as I tried to drive us safely home
      The foreplay didn't end when we walked in.
but that's a story for another poem
Written by eroseternal (Tim Eros)
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Author's Note
Couples tend to be more intimate when no one is around, but sometimes intimacy is what you do together when everyone else around. Pleasuring one of you should be thrilling for both of you.
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