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Public Submission
She was expressing a little concern
It seems foreplay was never long enough
So I got a new toy that I thought she might enjoy
It's amazing what we do when we're in love
The next day we went to the mall together
I thought it would be a great time to wear it
completely straddled around my jewels and in my anal
ready the remote, I was ready to go
I wondered what she'd say when I share it
When we arrived, I looked into her eyes
and gave her the little black control
I explained what it was and everything it does
It has a different vibration with each hit of the button
and how I'd be at her mercy as we stroll
At first she was surprised, then she smiled
and didn't hesitate to start using it
Let the foreplay begin, it was a great sensation
as I walked in the midst strangers feeling it
Fast and hard, slow and soft,
and heartbeat vibrations filled my spot
We'd walk in a store and she would do it more
She was having fun with my public submission
I could see the experience was getting her hot
When we left, she played with it
as I tried to drive us safely home
The foreplay didn't end when we walked in.
but that's a story for another poem
It seems foreplay was never long enough
So I got a new toy that I thought she might enjoy
It's amazing what we do when we're in love
The next day we went to the mall together
I thought it would be a great time to wear it
completely straddled around my jewels and in my anal
ready the remote, I was ready to go
I wondered what she'd say when I share it
When we arrived, I looked into her eyes
and gave her the little black control
I explained what it was and everything it does
It has a different vibration with each hit of the button
and how I'd be at her mercy as we stroll
At first she was surprised, then she smiled
and didn't hesitate to start using it
Let the foreplay begin, it was a great sensation
as I walked in the midst strangers feeling it
Fast and hard, slow and soft,
and heartbeat vibrations filled my spot
We'd walk in a store and she would do it more
She was having fun with my public submission
I could see the experience was getting her hot
When we left, she played with it
as I tried to drive us safely home
The foreplay didn't end when we walked in.
but that's a story for another poem
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