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weekend escapes
been skiing in the rain,
it hasn't snowed for
years I've contemplated fleeing,
that's all I'm say'n ..
Published 17th Jan 2020
Author's Note
winter breaks
are off ..
are off ..
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17th Jan 2020 3:34pm
The overlap in your work is akin to the kireji, a word which cuts the two parts of a haiku. I think that's the most fascinating thing I find about it; it has a traditional Asian feel with a modern delivery that provokes thought.
17th Jan 2020 11:59pm
thoughts run into each other in
my head and quickly fall apart
before I've figured them out ..
18th Jan 2020 2:31pm
17th Jan 2020 5:24pm
Sensible, that...fleeing
I hate shoveling snow
hither and yon hence,
México I recommend
flight to sunnier climes...hugs... Ely
I hate shoveling snow
hither and yon hence,
México I recommend
flight to sunnier climes...hugs... Ely
17th Jan 2020 6:56pm
17th Jan 2020 10:18pm
