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Write Me Back
Chase me, please!
Loitering
on the porch
It's so me...
like children....
The mouse howls
Wolf paws nose
Hawk's high screech
It's me, so they sigh
Oh, dear! and too
....impatiently
I wake to mist
eyes at 2:05
Your face to me
floats, apparently
in the grey haze
chasing my
sleepless eyes
I await
your reply
Loitering
on the porch
It's so me...
like children....
The mouse howls
Wolf paws nose
Hawk's high screech
It's me, so they sigh
Oh, dear! and too
....impatiently
I wake to mist
eyes at 2:05
Your face to me
floats, apparently
in the grey haze
chasing my
sleepless eyes
I await
your reply
Published 14th Jan 2020
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What an intriguing and imaginative poem. It left me smiling hoping that you get what you desire. A fine poem, my friend!
14th Jan 2020 3:59pm
15th Jan 2020 2:20am
Wowzers EW.......I can’t see how anyone could ignore this invitation.......luv the mysterious feel of this.......hope he writes soon.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
15th Jan 2020 2:22am
16th Jan 2020 6:54am
Beautifully written love the "wolf paws nose" the imagery in this is fantastic thank you
