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MY CRUSH LOVE LETTER FOR YOU
My eyes that care with a tender stare
They want to caress your face they dare
Opening lips to kiss you their confess
Embracing you with a love to share
My words that say if they may
How they feel the truth is real
My rush is much I start to blush
Wondering if you don't mind my crush
My crush is for you
It's all so pink
Please don't turn it sadly blue
I've been dying to know what you think all week
My heart bopping for you to speak
My letter he opened with gentle ease
I'm nervous and freaking so crazily
Lord show me a strong sign if you please
The sun then shine's in a sudden breeze
Finished reading he seems to be
He turns to see me surprisingly
A hint as he smiles amazingly
HE'S NOW COMING STRAIGHT TOWARDS ME...
WRITTEN JANUARY 12, 2020
AUTHOR NANCY RDZ LL
They want to caress your face they dare
Opening lips to kiss you their confess
Embracing you with a love to share
My words that say if they may
How they feel the truth is real
My rush is much I start to blush
Wondering if you don't mind my crush
My crush is for you
It's all so pink
Please don't turn it sadly blue
I've been dying to know what you think all week
My heart bopping for you to speak
My letter he opened with gentle ease
I'm nervous and freaking so crazily
Lord show me a strong sign if you please
The sun then shine's in a sudden breeze
Finished reading he seems to be
He turns to see me surprisingly
A hint as he smiles amazingly
HE'S NOW COMING STRAIGHT TOWARDS ME...
WRITTEN JANUARY 12, 2020
AUTHOR NANCY RDZ LL
Written by
NANCY_RDZ_STORIES
(WRITER LYRICIST ARTIST)
Published 13th Jan 2020
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13th Jan 2020 7:47am
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Re: Re. MY CRUSH LOVE LETTER FOR YOU
13th Jan 2020 2:27pm
Thank you hun, I worked hard on this was tricky a little coming out like this rhyme. But i smiled a lot as i achieved it. Even a simple crush poem isn't easy to write lol. I had many different angles to writing it but had to redo every time and finally decided on this piece. But thank you for loving it hun means a lot glad it's made your day 🤗❤🙂
Re. MY CRUSH LOVE LETTER FOR YOU
13th Jan 2020 8:12am
beautifully written with all the pure essence of a crush filled with love its a wonderful thing to be able to feel this way about someone special in heart mind and soul...respect
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Re: Re. MY CRUSH LOVE LETTER FOR YOU
14th Jan 2020 3:56am
Thanks hun, yes basically just innocent love through a crush and wondering if the other will feel the same is the exciting part. I remember that stuff going through that and notes passing haha its cute memories to remember. Thankd for liking hun.
Re: Re. MY CRUSH LOVE LETTER FOR YOU
14th Jan 2020 11:07am
your very welcome poetess yes the younger years when you went after someone as you did it for love those were the days i miss them nowadays its all about useing and abuseing someone for ones own personal gain love has become a thing of the past but yet it still exist in some hearts and minds which is a rare thing to find coming from a pure heart with honor and love with respect..
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Re: Re. MY CRUSH LOVE LETTER FOR YOU
14th Jan 2020 2:15pm
Very much true and its now harder to find and get but never giving up. Thanks hun 🤗
Re: Re. MY CRUSH LOVE LETTER FOR YOU
14th Jan 2020 4:26pm
never give up the dream of love cause there is someone out here seeking and searching for you as well wink...respect
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Re: Re. MY CRUSH LOVE LETTER FOR YOU
14th Jan 2020 5:27pm
Re: Re. MY CRUSH LOVE LETTER FOR YOU
14th Jan 2020 6:05pm
its a strong mind that will survive with an even stronger heart...respect one love
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Re: Re. MY CRUSH LOVE LETTER FOR YOU
14th Jan 2020 6:09pm
Awww that's sweet hun, I honestly silently like someone but idk if he would like me lol I honestly rather stay quiet lol
Re: Re. MY CRUSH LOVE LETTER FOR YOU
14th Jan 2020 6:16pm
awww thats sweet to hear sometimes it best to stay quiet and see were it goes remember communciations is the key if you want someone to know how one feels for a hush mouth cant be feeded and l wish you the best dear poetess I wish you the best for you have a beautiful kindred soul...respect
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Re: Re. MY CRUSH LOVE LETTER FOR YOU
14th Jan 2020 6:36pm
Haha.... I really do prefer stay quiet, it be embarrassing if he knows and doesn't like me back. I am just happy he has talked to me I'm ok with that if more ill be very happy happy lol
Re: Re. MY CRUSH LOVE LETTER FOR YOU
14th Jan 2020 6:48pm
but then again if you dont let it be known then how will know if the feelings are equality exchange and besides whats not to like about you as far as i can see you got a good heart that is caring and understanding you got alot love to give for you are a smart woman with intelligence your funny and creative with talent with a kindred soul and heart for you've gone through no more and no less than anyone eles dealing with love and life stop being so hard on yourself your a beautiful woman dont sale thyself short this is just my insight of what i see within you and i've just meet you as a friend...respect
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Re: Re. MY CRUSH LOVE LETTER FOR YOU
14th Jan 2020 7:49pm
Thank you hun... I'm just the type I'd rather wait for him to show he interested. Like Shakespeare said to be or not to be that's the question? That will then follow then next saying what's meant to be will be for you..What God has in mond set for us in words and I feel that's true. I'm also the type I like guys making a first move ill talk to them but i just won't make special moves or special talk to show um very interested no I'm just different when it comes to it. Lol.
Re: Re. MY CRUSH LOVE LETTER FOR YOU
14th Jan 2020 9:04pm
I feel you deeply on that note if it is your time someone will make the first move if they are truly into you...respect
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Re. MY CRUSH LOVE LETTER FOR YOU
13th Jan 2020 1:41pm
Beautifully captured deep feeling ... are crushes just simply luscious ...
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Re: Re. MY CRUSH LOVE LETTER FOR YOU
14th Jan 2020 3:57am
Thank you hun I really appreciate it a lot. Crushes in life are the best thing to feel 🙂
Re. MY CRUSH LOVE LETTER FOR YOU
14th Jan 2020 2:05am
That is really sweet and lovely. It has a nice syllabic harmony and meter. 💖
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Re: Re. MY CRUSH LOVE LETTER FOR YOU
14th Jan 2020 3:58am
Re. MY CRUSH LOVE LETTER FOR YOU
14th Jan 2020 5:36pm
Very sweet write, Ms. Nancy. Welcome to DU. You'll find many a kindred spirit here. 😊
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Re: Re. MY CRUSH LOVE LETTER FOR YOU
14th Jan 2020 5:39pm
Thank you so much hun I really appreciate it. I seen many awesome poets its all very inspiring ❤❤❤❤😊😊😊😊😊🤗🤗🤗🤗