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The Suicide King
Walking back into the yard
To a standing ovation now
The Suicide King
With the Thorns sticking out
Scars resembling lightning bolts
You can't fix my faults
with your happy to see you frown
I come from a town where guns
Became our friends
But words of victims shattered the ground
Swallowed whole.
I found happiness in the barrel of a colt.
To a standing ovation now
The Suicide King
With the Thorns sticking out
Scars resembling lightning bolts
You can't fix my faults
with your happy to see you frown
I come from a town where guns
Became our friends
But words of victims shattered the ground
Swallowed whole.
I found happiness in the barrel of a colt.
Published 12th Jan 2020
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12th Jan 2020 9:51pm
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12th Jan 2020 10:41pm
"with you happy to see you frown" ... poetic gold with this one ... powerful write ...
13th Jan 2020 12:16pm
"You can't fix my faults
with your happy to see you frown"
I have to agree with LilDragonFly… This had my eyes roll over the words again and again a few times. Brilliant!
Delanee.
with your happy to see you frown"
I have to agree with LilDragonFly… This had my eyes roll over the words again and again a few times. Brilliant!
Delanee.
