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Subtle Smells
Love
has always been
in the mind
within the feelings
of a deep
inner belief
sex
is just a fuck
a mutual buzz
between the sheets
love
was never in the air
just a subtle smell
of bodily fluids
where sticky fingers
meet
has always been
in the mind
within the feelings
of a deep
inner belief
sex
is just a fuck
a mutual buzz
between the sheets
love
was never in the air
just a subtle smell
of bodily fluids
where sticky fingers
meet
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Re. Subtle Smells
12th Jan 2020 1:06pm
Hmm. Love, has to be made; beyond the figment of ones imagination !
It is no wonder why you’re single... 🤯🤭🤐
It is no wonder why you’re single... 🤯🤭🤐
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Re: Re. Subtle Smells
12th Jan 2020 1:30pm
If love
deeply caring
for someone
is just a figment
of ones imagination
because it has to be made
between the sheets
then
in my sad
ignorant
opinion
it's just a substitute
making love
is to breed
having sex
is just a mutual buzz
where two
can get high
at the same time
at the same moment
in the same space
P.s
I'm single
because
I choose to be
to find a body
to lay with
is easy
deeply caring
for someone
is just a figment
of ones imagination
because it has to be made
between the sheets
then
in my sad
ignorant
opinion
it's just a substitute
making love
is to breed
having sex
is just a mutual buzz
where two
can get high
at the same time
at the same moment
in the same space
P.s
I'm single
because
I choose to be
to find a body
to lay with
is easy
Re: Re. Subtle Smells
12th Jan 2020 1:36pm
Caring, is oft birthed upon the premise of merging with a lover, holistically; emotionally, psychologically and sexually.
The latter is important and to reduce it to something so little as a ‘subtle smell’ speaks volumes to who you are, deep down.
The latter is important and to reduce it to something so little as a ‘subtle smell’ speaks volumes to who you are, deep down.
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Re: Re. Subtle Smells
12th Jan 2020 2:25pm
The premise of merging with a lover eh
so the act
of laying with someone
having sex
means
love
it is just an assumption
it's just a buzz
a beautiful high
holistically; emotionally
intimately interconnected
to reach that peak
for a few seconds
that's it
there's nothing like it
where two can become one
unless we can connect brain to brain
then take a drug
if you believe psychologically
that sex Means love
a deep feeling
of caring for someone
what can I say
have a little read
on
Platonic
AND
pheromones
when one confuses
sex with love
the deep caring
for someone
that's when problems
begin
P.s
I'm a little surprised
you know who I am
deep down inside
because I'm still trying
to find out
who I am
inside
Thank you
For reading
so the act
of laying with someone
having sex
means
love
it is just an assumption
it's just a buzz
a beautiful high
holistically; emotionally
intimately interconnected
to reach that peak
for a few seconds
that's it
there's nothing like it
where two can become one
unless we can connect brain to brain
then take a drug
if you believe psychologically
that sex Means love
a deep feeling
of caring for someone
what can I say
have a little read
on
Platonic
AND
pheromones
when one confuses
sex with love
the deep caring
for someone
that's when problems
begin
P.s
I'm a little surprised
you know who I am
deep down inside
because I'm still trying
to find out
who I am
inside
Thank you
For reading
Re: Re. Subtle Smells
12th Jan 2020 2:35pm
Oh. Please, don’t twist my words to suit your hollow narrative !
That’s exactly what an immature twat incapable of loving another human being does... 🤯
That’s exactly what an immature twat incapable of loving another human being does... 🤯
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Re: Re. Subtle Smells
13th Jan 2020 8:07am
I'm sorry if I have
invaded
your comfort zone
your sad infantile belief
in those love story's
you read or watch on TV
I would think
those who rent their body's
for a fee
would have some thing say
on your ignorant belief
So I suggest
YOU take your thumb
out of your mouth
put away your comfort blanket
and take a look around
It will be scary
frightening in fact
And you are
Frightened
Your reply
with those words
immature twat incapable of loving another human being
proves
My point
for when you are
questioned
on your line thinking
you break down
and scream
Like a child
I await your reply
with bated breath
invaded
your comfort zone
your sad infantile belief
in those love story's
you read or watch on TV
I would think
those who rent their body's
for a fee
would have some thing say
on your ignorant belief
So I suggest
YOU take your thumb
out of your mouth
put away your comfort blanket
and take a look around
It will be scary
frightening in fact
And you are
Frightened
Your reply
with those words
immature twat incapable of loving another human being
proves
My point
for when you are
questioned
on your line thinking
you break down
and scream
Like a child
I await your reply
with bated breath
Re: Re. Subtle Smells
13th Jan 2020 8:23am
Oh. You await my reply with bated breath...
LOL
You truly are a sad pathetic little man, and like I said, it is no wonder why you’re single !
LOL
You truly are a sad pathetic little man, and like I said, it is no wonder why you’re single !
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Re: Re. Subtle Smells
13th Jan 2020 9:23am
Is that it
is that all
you can say
no curiosity
to do
a little research
no self reflection
to debate
to question
my line of thinking
you just write words
like
You truly are a sad pathetic little man, and like I said, it is no wonder why you’re single !
are these words
supposed to
make me think
that I might be
a little wrong
I find it sad
when communicating
with a chimpanzee
mentality mind
who could well have
the potential
to become
a rational
open minded
human being
As I said
I await your reply
with bated breath
is that all
you can say
no curiosity
to do
a little research
no self reflection
to debate
to question
my line of thinking
you just write words
like
You truly are a sad pathetic little man, and like I said, it is no wonder why you’re single !
are these words
supposed to
make me think
that I might be
a little wrong
I find it sad
when communicating
with a chimpanzee
mentality mind
who could well have
the potential
to become
a rational
open minded
human being
As I said
I await your reply
with bated breath
Re. Subtle Smells
12th Jan 2020 1:07pm