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Wolf Moon
( a renga )
disturbs my instincts
one step before the other
in the lone village
a solitary
to howl and becomes many
in the bitter cold
its eyes of twilight
eclipse in a taste of blood
that drips from its jaws
disturbs my instincts
one step before the other
in the lone village
a solitary
to howl and becomes many
in the bitter cold
its eyes of twilight
eclipse in a taste of blood
that drips from its jaws
Published 11th Jan 2020
| Edited 13th Jan 2020
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- Edited 29th Apr 2020 5:45pm
11th Jan 2020 11:43am
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11th Jan 2020 12:00pm
11th Jan 2020 12:16pm
It's like three haikus put together? Or am I off base here. Anywhere-great images here Jade. Dig it.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
11th Jan 2020 1:23pm
Hi sister Kitty xo
It’s a poem expressed through the yin & yang of haiku-senryu. The wolf moon is what appeared (as the first full moon of this month) on January 10th, which also went into a total eclipse.
And I’m glad you liked the set.🙏🏻
tiger hugs
Jade🐾
It’s a poem expressed through the yin & yang of haiku-senryu. The wolf moon is what appeared (as the first full moon of this month) on January 10th, which also went into a total eclipse.
And I’m glad you liked the set.🙏🏻
tiger hugs
Jade🐾
11th Jan 2020 2:29pm
beautifully composed what an enlighten tribute to the wolf...respect poetess
11th Jan 2020 11:17pm
Thank you, brother Stoney, it’s so good of you with your staunch support.🙏🏻
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12th Jan 2020 1:10pm
you are always welcome poetess for i enjoy the journeys your writing takes my heart and mind upon...respect
Anonymous
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12th Jan 2020 1:17am
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12th Jan 2020 2:04am
I thank you with my heart for your very thoughtful reading.
Regarding if I was speaking of a blood moon:
The wolf moon is what appeared (as the first full moon of this month) on January 10th, which also went into a total eclipse - thus that full moon also appeared as a blood moon due to it being a total eclipse. So the event inspired me to write “Wolf Moon”, I couldn’t pass up the opportunity.
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Regarding if I was speaking of a blood moon:
The wolf moon is what appeared (as the first full moon of this month) on January 10th, which also went into a total eclipse - thus that full moon also appeared as a blood moon due to it being a total eclipse. So the event inspired me to write “Wolf Moon”, I couldn’t pass up the opportunity.
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13th Jan 2020 00:18am
What a cool spill Ms. Jade. I was coming home a couple of nights ago and the moon looked so beautiful thinking I should write something and here you are.
Thank you for sharing.
Thank you for sharing.
13th Jan 2020 00:32am
You’re so welcome, dear Wally... that moon was irresistible! And thank /you/ for your sharing in return.🙏🏻
Jade🐾
Jade🐾
15th Jan 2020 4:19pm
This is beautiful and raw Jade. I love your eastern short forms. (I always say that)
Kathy
Kathy
16th Jan 2020 4:09pm
*smiles*
Yes, you do, and I appreciate that you feel it bears repeating. Thank you, Kathy.🙏🏻
Jadey🐾
Yes, you do, and I appreciate that you feel it bears repeating. Thank you, Kathy.🙏🏻
Jadey🐾
