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Crush 4 Poets
You there
standing buck naked
in your poetry
You caught ahold of me
I crushed at first write
the first one I read
I mean
I crush on the craft
naked true poems
poets-of-a-feather
bringing hearts together
Engulf me
Hex me
Surround me
Piece up my puzzle
little by little
Lend me the eyes
that rest upon your pages...
Last night my lover curled
around twisted guts
his mind miserably, darkly contorted
in our king-sized latex mattress bed
bought to celebrate
how we are not nearly dead
There he could scarcely move
so I spoke of your soul in poem
read him a page or two of you
and carried him along your verse
Until he was strong enough to rise
and thank the universe
His triggered mind and guts
uncock to the sound
of the hammer you set
in your metaphorical gun
Penning the words
to give our black hopes
a bit of your fun
So don't be surprised
if we crush
a poet-crush
on your juicy genius
Hun 🌹💘
standing buck naked
in your poetry
You caught ahold of me
I crushed at first write
the first one I read
I mean
I crush on the craft
naked true poems
poets-of-a-feather
bringing hearts together
Engulf me
Hex me
Surround me
Piece up my puzzle
little by little
Lend me the eyes
that rest upon your pages...
Last night my lover curled
around twisted guts
his mind miserably, darkly contorted
in our king-sized latex mattress bed
bought to celebrate
how we are not nearly dead
There he could scarcely move
so I spoke of your soul in poem
read him a page or two of you
and carried him along your verse
Until he was strong enough to rise
and thank the universe
His triggered mind and guts
uncock to the sound
of the hammer you set
in your metaphorical gun
Penning the words
to give our black hopes
a bit of your fun
So don't be surprised
if we crush
a poet-crush
on your juicy genius
Hun 🌹💘
Written by
EdibleWords
Published 11th Jan 2020
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Re. Crush 4 Poets
11th Jan 2020 00:27am
This is one of those pieces that applies to every writer on this site, so that makes it tight
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Re. Crush 4 Poets
11th Jan 2020 1:44am
Love this write Edible.
I mean poets understand this type of falling .....amazing.
I mean poets understand this type of falling .....amazing.
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Re. Crush 4 Poets
Anonymous
11th Jan 2020 3:09am
Hey EW.......this is absolutely brilliant.......Wowzers.......I’m speechless........so much things within this.......enjoyed.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re. Crush 4 Poets
11th Jan 2020 5:40am
Re: Re. Crush 4 Poets
12th Jan 2020 6:46pm
Re. Crush 4 Poets
First thought on reading - caught but with a smile on face! (I am sometimes naked when I post and write poems here, so the first two verses spoke to me!)
We here probably all have our heart- (and something-else-) throbs among our fellow poets. I am not surprised some of the poets in history enjoyed stirring relationships!
I am OK with my erotic poems being read out to lovers outside DUP as an aphrodisiac , as illustrated by these lines:
There he could scarcely move
so I spoke of your soul in poem
read him a page or two of you
and carried him along your verse
Until he was strong enough to rise
and thank the universe
His triggered mind and guts
uncock to the sound
of the hammer you set
in your metaphorical gun
I unashamedly RL this!
We here probably all have our heart- (and something-else-) throbs among our fellow poets. I am not surprised some of the poets in history enjoyed stirring relationships!
I am OK with my erotic poems being read out to lovers outside DUP as an aphrodisiac , as illustrated by these lines:
There he could scarcely move
so I spoke of your soul in poem
read him a page or two of you
and carried him along your verse
Until he was strong enough to rise
and thank the universe
His triggered mind and guts
uncock to the sound
of the hammer you set
in your metaphorical gun
I unashamedly RL this!
1
Re: Re. Crush 4 Poets
12th Jan 2020 6:47pm
Re. Crush 4 Poets
11th Jan 2020 11:34am
This is both a profound and powerful poem that is very easily relatable! A fine poem!
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Re: Re. Crush 4 Poets
11th Jan 2020 4:14pm
🌹😎💖
Thank you! Looking forward to getting the pleasure to acquaint myself with you!🌹
Jessica Solomon ❤️
Thank you! Looking forward to getting the pleasure to acquaint myself with you!🌹
Jessica Solomon ❤️
Re: Re. Crush 4 Poets
12th Jan 2020 9:25pm
Anonymous
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12th Jan 2020 6:31pm
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12th Jan 2020 6:41pm
Re. Crush 4 Poets
14th Jan 2020 12:59pm
Wow, just that first stanza got me hooked! Another lovely read EW. So much power carried by this poem.
Love
NuBorn
Love
NuBorn
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Re: Re. Crush 4 Poets
18th Jan 2020 00:13am
Oh, sorry to ignore! I'm so lagging on responses these days! 🌹💝
Thank you!🍬
Thank you!🍬
Anonymous
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18th Jan 2020 00:08am
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Re: Re. Crush 4 Poets
18th Jan 2020 00:14am
I'm so glad! I think this has to go in my future chapbook... Thank you so much! 💫