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[ Visual ] Love
Written by
JohnnyBlaze
Published 9th Jan 2020
| Edited 30th Jul 2020
Author's Note
credit for image choice and design
goes to my better half, Ahavati ❤📷📝🎨
for the #LookingForLove comp @
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11193/
goes to my better half, Ahavati ❤📷📝🎨
for the #LookingForLove comp @
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11193/
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Re: Re. Love
22nd Jan 2020 12:55pm
There is no one more skilled at pairing visuals and poetry than you. And now that the #LookingForLove comp is over - which you deservedly won - Thank You for helping choose the image and designing my entry.
❤📷📝🎨
❤📷📝🎨
Re. Love
9th Jan 2020 2:18pm
Re. Love
9th Jan 2020 7:33pm
OMG, this Brevity is Gorgeous
and just now gave me the warm electrical fuzzies associated with the type of intimacy i crave!
and just now gave me the warm electrical fuzzies associated with the type of intimacy i crave!
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Re: Re. Love
9th Jan 2020 7:45pm
Well, Thank you, Tallen ... but ... are you certain that it's not your electric blanket short circuiting?
Re: Re. Love
9th Jan 2020 8:03pm
i'm certain; i used to have one of those blankets and didn't like it at all and so i gave it away.
artificial heat (and intimacy) and me don't get along too well
artificial heat (and intimacy) and me don't get along too well
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Re: Re. Love
9th Jan 2020 8:16pm
Re: Re. Love
9th Jan 2020 8:22pm
ahahahahahahahaha!!
Fuel for a Funny spill in the future (?)
i know You know that intimacy to me is not the same
as whatever e1 else might think it is
right?
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/326719-untangle-me/
Fuel for a Funny spill in the future (?)
i know You know that intimacy to me is not the same
as whatever e1 else might think it is
right?
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/326719-untangle-me/
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Re. Love
10th Jan 2020 00:40am
Re. Love
10th Jan 2020 5:48am
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10th Jan 2020 9:25am
Re. Love
10th Jan 2020 5:57am
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11th Jan 2020 1:50pm
Re. Love
11th Jan 2020 4:07am
That's what I'm talking about, it's a powerful message with little words.
Good luck in the comp.
Good luck in the comp.
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11th Jan 2020 1:35pm
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12th Jan 2020 8:30pm
Re. Love
15th Jan 2020 6:42pm
I am struggling with Love at the moment, so Love Poems in particular are touching me.
I like the gentleness of this one. Top marks.
SeaCat
I like the gentleness of this one. Top marks.
SeaCat
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Re: Re. Love
15th Jan 2020 6:51pm
The struggle usually ends when expectations are abandoned.
Thank you, SeaCat
I have a great source of inspiration when it comes to the subject.
* nods head towards my better half *
Thank you, SeaCat
I have a great source of inspiration when it comes to the subject.
* nods head towards my better half *
Re: Re. Love
15th Jan 2020 7:39pm
Re. Love
22nd Jan 2020 1:07pm
A moving short poem. Thank you.
The adventure of a life time.... That is what we all hope for. D'you remember Mary Hopkins: "Those were the days my friend/ We thought they'd never end". Maybe I've just lived too long.
"Love is laughter" has been my definition for the past 50 happy years.
The adventure of a life time.... That is what we all hope for. D'you remember Mary Hopkins: "Those were the days my friend/ We thought they'd never end". Maybe I've just lived too long.
"Love is laughter" has been my definition for the past 50 happy years.
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Re: Re. Love
22nd Jan 2020 1:43pm
I'm not familiar with her, so I'll get busy with Wikipedia.
Yes, I would agree. Laughter is unabashed Joy that can't be contained.
Thank you for reading, Ammonite.
Yes, I would agree. Laughter is unabashed Joy that can't be contained.
Thank you for reading, Ammonite.
Re. Love
26th Jan 2020 9:47am
this wholesomely encompasses all...the all & nil ...of Love..of what it needs tends to be , naturally eventually eternally ...taht's the ultimate liberation . perfectly done, in brevity & overall presentation JB !
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Re: Re. Love
10th May 2020 7:43pm
Re. [ Visual ] Love
8th Mar 2024 1:18pm
You captured Love and its essence so beatifully.
I love the image you chose, it pairs perfectly.
I love the image you chose, it pairs perfectly.
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