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Holding
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Holding
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Wonderful moments
create wonderful memories
Thoughts on holding hands & kissing
Written by
SerenitySongs
Published
8th Jan 2020
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- Edited 2nd Feb 2020 11:45am
8th Jan 2020 1:33pm
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Re: Re. Holding
SerenitySongs
8th Jan 2020 3:48pm
Indeed! It's a happy thought on a cold night 👌👍🤗
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snugglebuck
8th Jan 2020 1:46pm
What a sweet little write to start my morning bright.🌅
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Re: Re. Holding
SerenitySongs
8th Jan 2020 3:49pm
A warm thought to a brighter day 👌👍🤗
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Ahavati
(Tams)
8th Jan 2020 2:29pm
This is such a lovely and tender thought! The only friendly change I would suggest is to lower the cap of thoughts in L3, as a semi colon denotes the continuation of a thought, much like a comma would.
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Re: Re. Holding
SerenitySongs
8th Jan 2020 3:53pm
Yes quite correct
Actually changed it with a space between l2 and l3 as it's a pausing thought separate from the other
Thankyou for pointing it out Ahavati is 👌♥️
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Re: Re. Holding
Ahavati
(Tams)
8th Jan 2020 3:54pm
You're very welcome!
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