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Dancer 2020
mocha skin
kohl darkened eyes
moves like oil
floating on water
pelvis swaying
shoulders sliding
fingers clapping
cymbals tapping
movement under control
yet free
attuned to the rhythm
of the music
and the heavens
(C)2020 Raibeart Bruis
kohl darkened eyes
moves like oil
floating on water
pelvis swaying
shoulders sliding
fingers clapping
cymbals tapping
movement under control
yet free
attuned to the rhythm
of the music
and the heavens
(C)2020 Raibeart Bruis
Published 8th Jan 2020
Author's Note
Inspired by a dancer at a new year’s eve party. He was hypnotic and truly amazing
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9th Mar 2020 8:30pm
I'm a little on the fence about this one.... I like the feel and monotone of the piece but i'm also a little confused about its depths.... is this party apart of a parade??? is this guy drunk or nude??? is he an exotic dancer??? is he a fantasy??? my thoughts are all over the place... very well written... I do like it indeed.... I feel love drunk....
9th Mar 2020 8:35pm
