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Out for a drive
Out for a drive
Traveling down the interstate when it started to snow in mid December
It became very slippery cars and trucks sliding all over the road I slow down to retain control to no avail went into a Spain around and around I go.
Felt like I was going to shit my pants in steed I piss them holding on for dear life as Spain out of control just missed a car that was piled into the side of a Bus watching a trucker trailer miss them as well.
Just ahead was a big pile up must have been 30 vehicles that was about to slam into turn the steering wheel into the Spain gain a little control aimed for the side of the road at that moment said to myself oh FUCK it the side of a mountain and all downhill now my ass is grass off I went.
Rolling over and over glass braking covering my face to keep from being cut my car slammed into a big old Oak tree that when I lost canoness the next thing I remember was someone are you okay yes I think so. As I was being air lifted out saw what was left of my car.
By nutbuster
Traveling down the interstate when it started to snow in mid December
It became very slippery cars and trucks sliding all over the road I slow down to retain control to no avail went into a Spain around and around I go.
Felt like I was going to shit my pants in steed I piss them holding on for dear life as Spain out of control just missed a car that was piled into the side of a Bus watching a trucker trailer miss them as well.
Just ahead was a big pile up must have been 30 vehicles that was about to slam into turn the steering wheel into the Spain gain a little control aimed for the side of the road at that moment said to myself oh FUCK it the side of a mountain and all downhill now my ass is grass off I went.
Rolling over and over glass braking covering my face to keep from being cut my car slammed into a big old Oak tree that when I lost canoness the next thing I remember was someone are you okay yes I think so. As I was being air lifted out saw what was left of my car.
By nutbuster
Published 7th Jan 2020
Author's Note
dangers of driving on ice covered roads
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8th Jan 2020 00:25am
Holy crap quite a tumble you took there, good to see you are still in one piece.
8th Jan 2020 00:28am
thank you for read and comment
saw the picture on the net and wrote this but i have slid off the road several times due to black ice
saw the picture on the net and wrote this but i have slid off the road several times due to black ice
8th Jan 2020 00:32am
8th Jan 2020 00:40am
8th Jan 2020 1:21am
I can't imagine feeling that out of control. It seems like a scary moment. Well done.
8th Jan 2020 1:27am
8th Jan 2020 1:28am
8th Jan 2020 2:55am
Yes scary, I live on a Mountain Road 10% grade 7k ft I know what your saying Good suspenseful write
8th Jan 2020 5:55pm
8th Jan 2020 6:45am
There are a few hillside roads near my home that have roads like you describe where it would be a feasible possibility to skid in icy weather and leave the road in the way described. I did wonder from the pic if this was something you experienced before you explained the pic was borrowed off the 'net.
8th Jan 2020 5:59pm
the pic. is real from what i read it was in PA. some were was on breaking news i get on my lap top
thanks for read and comment
thanks for read and comment
