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Black Heart
step up
toe to toe
if you hate me
I don't know
care isn't in my control
have everything I could ever want
and more
home, money, love of my family
all connected by our faith
the fuck what you think I should believe
bringer of bullshit
tell me about your miserable existence
breaking news!
we all got problems
not trying to be insensitive
just don't expect sympathy
not when you're trying to rain on my parade
love days filled with kisses
beautiful lover
makes for a beautiful mortality
does that make you jealous?
good!
I'm not usually spiteful
I just enjoy when fuckers get what they deserve
bringer of hate
sorry you have to constantly masterbat
it's not easy for everyone
to nut up
show a girl what's up
not trying to brag
just saying I have better things to do
than put vileness onto others
hey!
I'm always ready
got something to say?
we can debate
or if you like
we can go straight to the fist
but it won't hurt me
not one bit
I got everything going for me
and your just a sad little prick
being eaten alive by your black heart
toe to toe
if you hate me
I don't know
care isn't in my control
have everything I could ever want
and more
home, money, love of my family
all connected by our faith
the fuck what you think I should believe
bringer of bullshit
tell me about your miserable existence
breaking news!
we all got problems
not trying to be insensitive
just don't expect sympathy
not when you're trying to rain on my parade
love days filled with kisses
beautiful lover
makes for a beautiful mortality
does that make you jealous?
good!
I'm not usually spiteful
I just enjoy when fuckers get what they deserve
bringer of hate
sorry you have to constantly masterbat
it's not easy for everyone
to nut up
show a girl what's up
not trying to brag
just saying I have better things to do
than put vileness onto others
hey!
I'm always ready
got something to say?
we can debate
or if you like
we can go straight to the fist
but it won't hurt me
not one bit
I got everything going for me
and your just a sad little prick
being eaten alive by your black heart
Published 6th Jan 2020
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6th Jan 2020 1:00pm
nicely written with true grit raw and uncut that black heart set it off for me...respect
6th Jan 2020 1:28pm
"...I'm not usually spiteful
I just enjoy when fuckers get what they deserve..."
Can we move to fists already, name the time and place and I'll show up... hahaha
Lovely script, too bad for the sad little prick
I just enjoy when fuckers get what they deserve..."
Can we move to fists already, name the time and place and I'll show up... hahaha
Lovely script, too bad for the sad little prick
6th Jan 2020 2:12pm
Indeed, love should never be an weight that drags you down to the darkest depths of the sea. In life I've loved many, but I've learned that some a harder to love than others.
7th Jan 2020 8:24am
Wow... Lots of fire in this little poem🔥
I think you've expressed your feelings well here!
I think you've expressed your feelings well here!
Anonymous
- Edited 11th Dec 2020 6:45pm
7th Jan 2020 1:08pm
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8th Jan 2020 6:07am
8th Jan 2020 7:30am
23rd Jan 2020 3:57am
Loved it, its true hard feelings and always someone tries to mess even our lil light of happiness of anything in our life. That only cause they having it bad and feels envious of someones things going better they think they can just interfere if they want but they wrong and they need be ignored and let them sweep off your shoulder like nothing and just blow it away.
Good write hun, poems are great when its got so much feelings 🤗❤
Good write hun, poems are great when its got so much feelings 🤗❤
Anonymous
24th Oct 2020 2:03pm
swimmin' in a sea of emotions DevilsChild, ... killer write You
Yeah, ... I know, .. I'm drownin' too
Yeah, ... I know, .. I'm drownin' too
