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Silent Haunting
( a Palindrome )
nowhere
to endlessly haunt
to walking on
old and sad streets
deserted from
dying tears
shining obliquely
yet eternally ghosting
cold moonlight
indifferently
moonlight cold
ghosting eternally yet
obliquely shining
tears dying
from deserted
streets sad and old
on walking to
haunt endlessly to
nowhere
nowhere
to endlessly haunt
to walking on
old and sad streets
deserted from
dying tears
shining obliquely
yet eternally ghosting
cold moonlight
indifferently
moonlight cold
ghosting eternally yet
obliquely shining
tears dying
from deserted
streets sad and old
on walking to
haunt endlessly to
nowhere
Published 5th Jan 2020
Author's Note
Entered in cabcool’s “Palindrome Poetry”.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Anonymous
5th Jan 2020 9:45pm
What a well conceived, well executed poem! (No surprise). In my humble opinion, the best poems are usually about the moon, love/loss or sadness... This piece was really enjoyable! Thanks!
7th Jan 2020 5:35am
Thank you, Poet, I’m glad you like my 2nd Palindrome attempt. It is after all a fascinating challenge.
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5th Jan 2020 9:54pm
7th Jan 2020 5:37am
6th Jan 2020 2:28am
I didn't know if I was coming or going (just teasing). Well done Jade.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
7th Jan 2020 5:40am
Ooooh you Kitty tease!
I’m so glad you like this ink.
tiger whiskers & huggles
Jade🐾
I’m so glad you like this ink.
tiger whiskers & huggles
Jade🐾
6th Jan 2020 4:27am
Dear JP
Backward, forward upside down and topsy turvy this was another fun read! Good luck for the comp. it’s a very interesting concept this Palindrome. Nicely done. H🌷
Backward, forward upside down and topsy turvy this was another fun read! Good luck for the comp. it’s a very interesting concept this Palindrome. Nicely done. H🌷
7th Jan 2020 5:45am
Aaaahh thank you, sister Honoria. Kinda like a mole out late at night, no?🦔
tiger nuzzle
Jade🐾
tiger nuzzle
Jade🐾
6th Jan 2020 12:58pm
love how you entwine the elements of the night woven into this piece that sometimes is filled with sadness of loneliness with ghostly images like echoes from the past...respect poetess
7th Jan 2020 5:49am
Why yes, brother Stoney, it’s all very much like that.
Reading List gratitude🙏🏻
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Reading List gratitude🙏🏻
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7th Jan 2020 11:54am
6th Jan 2020 1:02pm
7th Jan 2020 5:52am
Thank you do much, Poet NuBorn, for kind words of support...
And a place of honor on your Reading List🙏🏻
Jade🐾
And a place of honor on your Reading List🙏🏻
Jade🐾
8th Jan 2020 6:21pm
You have a knack for making these palindromes flow effortlessly.
Good luck in the comp.
Good luck in the comp.
16th Jan 2020 4:15pm
Why thank you, dear Wally, yet this is only my 2nd attempt at the form that I’ve published. I need to develop a bit of patina on more worthwhile efforts of this particular form.
Jade🐾
Jade🐾
15th Jan 2020 4:22pm
Dear Jade
Such a smooth execution of a beautiful and melancholy scene in a form I never tried but you inspire. Who knows, we'll see. x
Kathy
Such a smooth execution of a beautiful and melancholy scene in a form I never tried but you inspire. Who knows, we'll see. x
Kathy
16th Jan 2020 4:18pm
Thank you, Kathy, yes I hope we will see. It’s an honor when I find I’ve inspired a fellow poet,🙏🏻
Jadey🐾
Jadey🐾
