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A good woman is like
A good woman is like plum jam,
A really special treat,
Great when she is tarty,
At the same time sticky sweet.
A good woman is an enigma,
A real puzzling paradox,
One day: chaste and angelic,
The next she’s... (dot dot dot)
A good woman is like a sports car,
Sublime curves that never stop,
There’s plenty under the bonnet,
And vintage models are smoking hot.
A really special treat,
Great when she is tarty,
At the same time sticky sweet.
A good woman is an enigma,
A real puzzling paradox,
One day: chaste and angelic,
The next she’s... (dot dot dot)
A good woman is like a sports car,
Sublime curves that never stop,
There’s plenty under the bonnet,
And vintage models are smoking hot.
Published 4th Jan 2020
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4th Jan 2020 5:09am
4th Jan 2020 5:47am
4th Jan 2020 9:25am
Had LOL at first verse. As to the third, is it any surprise beautiful women and sports cars can be a seductive combination?
4th Jan 2020 12:04pm
Yes, I thought I would start with the silliest comparison I could think of. Glad you liked it.
13th Mar 2020 11:00pm
