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God has a billion eyes
God has a billion eyes
Has seen all your tears
Has heard all your cries
Across all the years
Behind all the lies
God has a billion eyes
Gives you free will
To which way you fly
Watches you still
If you fall or stay high
God has a billion eyes
That see all over time
They fill up the sky
Hidden thoughts they will find
hidden lusts that you sigh
God has a billion eyes
Has seen all the paths
Has seen where you lie
After all of your strife
Bids your soul a goodbye
Has seen all your tears
Has heard all your cries
Across all the years
Behind all the lies
God has a billion eyes
Gives you free will
To which way you fly
Watches you still
If you fall or stay high
God has a billion eyes
That see all over time
They fill up the sky
Hidden thoughts they will find
hidden lusts that you sigh
God has a billion eyes
Has seen all the paths
Has seen where you lie
After all of your strife
Bids your soul a goodbye
Published 3rd Jan 2020
| Edited 2nd Apr 2020
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3rd Jan 2020 8:33pm
7th Jan 2020 11:17pm
Omniscient but perhaps just letting us get on with it? Cheers for the comment
4th Jan 2020 7:42pm
Kind of a depressing spill especially if one is trying to witness to a godless existence.
But if this works for You, then so be it and i'll say well expressed
with timely rhymes
But if this works for You, then so be it and i'll say well expressed
with timely rhymes
7th Jan 2020 11:25pm
God could well be the ultimate many worlds purveyor and lets us get on with it, because in the end it's down to us, not him how it goes. I did change the last line. It used to go "takes your soul when you die"
Maybe that's better, I don't know? Thanks for commenting, got me thinking.
Maybe that's better, I don't know? Thanks for commenting, got me thinking.
Anonymous
29th Mar 2020 2:59pm
Brilliantly rhymed. I wish I could do that. :) Although my struggles with god run deep as expressed in Prayers which I wrote recently but I think this is very nicely written.
31st Mar 2020 7:15am
Thanks so much for your comments, I think everyone struggles with god! It's all a mistery really... thanks again, it means a lot!
