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Do you think of me, ever?
Do you think of me, ever?
After all our minds shared, the secret smiles and hehe's that started so innocent, but my god they ensnared. The heat that finally consumed me from my head to my toes, the words all absorbed, the effect so powerful it must surely show?
Do you think of me, ever?
The hours we spent in our secret world, one l never thought l'd enter, never planned to indulge. I fought myself so hard before giving in, to your fire, my awakening, the feeling of sin. The insistent pulses that began between my legs, the tortured desire invading my head.
Do you think of me, ever?
You opened up parts of me buried so deep, it would have been so much kinder to leave them asleep. Now after all, l have been left undone, mentally and physically, l have nowhere to run.
Do you think of me, ever?
After all our minds shared, the secret smiles and hehe's that started so innocent, but my god they ensnared. The heat that finally consumed me from my head to my toes, the words all absorbed, the effect so powerful it must surely show?
Do you think of me, ever?
The hours we spent in our secret world, one l never thought l'd enter, never planned to indulge. I fought myself so hard before giving in, to your fire, my awakening, the feeling of sin. The insistent pulses that began between my legs, the tortured desire invading my head.
Do you think of me, ever?
You opened up parts of me buried so deep, it would have been so much kinder to leave them asleep. Now after all, l have been left undone, mentally and physically, l have nowhere to run.
Do you think of me, ever?
Published 30th Dec 2019
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30th Dec 2019 10:58pm
Sometimes, it’s the fire that enables us to flourish, once again. So many people are living but dead on the inside, until someone emerges and reawakens us.
I hope you’ve learnt to dance in the flames, and not be reduced to ash !
A deeply fine write... 🔥🔥🔥
I hope you’ve learnt to dance in the flames, and not be reduced to ash !
A deeply fine write... 🔥🔥🔥
31st Dec 2019 2:15pm
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13th Jan 2020 6:15pm
I guess I'll never know, strange beautiful life isn't it! Thanks for your words NewBeginnings
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5th Feb 2020 2:11am
Hey Allis......luving this......feeling it’s emotions with every line.....not sure you truly get over sharing all of you with someone and then it ends and your forever luv them........thought provoking ink.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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29th Feb 2020 00:25am
Wow, I would have . . . but lo, ours was not . .
I enjoy your work. It's like a 1 on 1 conversation with your reader.
I enjoy your work. It's like a 1 on 1 conversation with your reader.
5th Mar 2020 8:25am
Thanks for the read and comment Tim Eros, much appreciated, glad you enjoyed this :)
