deepundergroundpoetry.com
I Don't Even Know
I have wasted paper
on peculiar thoughts
which ended up
dead the moment
they fell from the mighty pen.
What was I thinking?
No one will ever know.
on peculiar thoughts
which ended up
dead the moment
they fell from the mighty pen.
What was I thinking?
No one will ever know.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 8
reading list entries 1
comments 21
reads 477
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re. I Don't Even Know
30th Dec 2019 2:06am
I can relate to that, but i put em' on line anyway. Screw them if they don't like it.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
1
Re: Re. I Don't Even Know
30th Dec 2019 2:09am
Re. I Don't Even Know
30th Dec 2019 2:11am
LOL! If we don't know ourselves who else can? We might be surprised, Nikks! I love astute thoughts such as this.
1
Re. I Don't Even Know
30th Dec 2019 2:53am
Dear N,
This had me laugh aloud as I’ve done this many times. First few I tossed the errant words, then I thought keep them as proof I actually had a thought in mind at one time. I’m so glad you shared this and so glad I bumped into you. I love your art work! You’ve got your own gallery there. Very nice. H🌷
This had me laugh aloud as I’ve done this many times. First few I tossed the errant words, then I thought keep them as proof I actually had a thought in mind at one time. I’m so glad you shared this and so glad I bumped into you. I love your art work! You’ve got your own gallery there. Very nice. H🌷
1
Re: Re. I Don't Even Know
30th Dec 2019 3:01am
Thank you so much for stopping in and reading my blurbs ❤
No bare walls in my house.
I love cool small pieces of art!!
No bare walls in my house.
I love cool small pieces of art!!
Re. I Don't Even Know
Well I have found your musings, intriguing as well as amusing and thought provoking on many levels ... like this epic write and pic ... Please continue ... Bless and love ...
1
Re: Re. I Don't Even Know
30th Dec 2019 4:05am
Re. I Don't Even Know
30th Dec 2019 10:31am
I think we all have these moments. There's a lot we don't understand, so why not try to put thoughts to paper? Some may be fleeting but thats the point of poetry, I think. Some grey is needed for individual interpretation. I wish I could write like that, but I'm not that creative. Your poetry is awesome Nikki, don't fret!
1
Re: Re. I Don't Even Know
30th Dec 2019 12:21pm
Thank you BabyDoll
I appreciate that. ❤
Fleeting thoughts are my specialty
I chase after them only to let them go.
I appreciate that. ❤
Fleeting thoughts are my specialty
I chase after them only to let them go.
Re. I Don't Even Know
30th Dec 2019 11:12am
how the stringing tensions still alive that stint of moments ... those'peculiar' thoughts in the evoking as live wire ...through the nibbing contracts of a 'mighty' pen....ahh as you say .. before even it dies off falling ...before even we know feel it or no...beautifully capturing the creative eternity it feels . the unknown mystery of life of selves of love still in the search amidst n-deaths . fine piece nikkimoe. as is. :)
2
Re: Re. I Don't Even Know
30th Dec 2019 12:22pm
Re. I Don't Even Know
30th Dec 2019 5:47pm
Let the ability of non-ability serve
you. Accepting unknowability, &
letting it go of it, makes for( a transient *)
peace.
*needing to be reinforced & refreshed via daily vigilance against lapsing back to "clogged thinking" of the illusion, "I need To Know". Remember that we humans are most apt to replace "want" with "need", thus rigidifying the whole damn thing and promoting useless, worthless, & inflexible eXpectations. There. Now you KNOW !!!
you. Accepting unknowability, &
letting it go of it, makes for( a transient *)
peace.
*needing to be reinforced & refreshed via daily vigilance against lapsing back to "clogged thinking" of the illusion, "I need To Know". Remember that we humans are most apt to replace "want" with "need", thus rigidifying the whole damn thing and promoting useless, worthless, & inflexible eXpectations. There. Now you KNOW !!!
2
Re: Re. I Don't Even Know
30th Dec 2019 6:26pm
Re: Re. I Don't Even Know
30th Dec 2019 6:30pm
Re: Re. I Don't Even Know
30th Dec 2019 8:55pm
Re. I Don't Even Know
7th Jan 2020 7:33am
Re: Re. I Don't Even Know
8th Jan 2020 00:56am
Re: Re. I Don't Even Know
Damn that's gritty. Divinity as Daria. I'll have to borrow it eventually. Just letting you know first. It's too good
1
Re: Re. I Don't Even Know
8th Jan 2020 1:44am