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There Is No Secondary Casement (Written in 2010)
I ponder
my memory
and wander
to a recently
a time not long ago
pictures of love
so strong , when you look
they tell you so
all I need to know
is that the inferno
still burns and doesn't only
just glow
my time here is spent
if this is a so .
My mind
and what is meant
is blind
and hell bent
for I wont find
nor do I want
another you
or replacement
there is no parallel
or adjascent
a second set of apparell
or secondary casement
how could there be
when i have what is heaven sent
all i need is acknowledgement
for I believe in fair judgement
for I will drown as I stand
in the sea of repremand
because your worth it
please try to understand
for you I'd die and chop off my hand
just to proove it
and my love for you
lets just say it's very true
and I
could never lose it .
my memory
and wander
to a recently
a time not long ago
pictures of love
so strong , when you look
they tell you so
all I need to know
is that the inferno
still burns and doesn't only
just glow
my time here is spent
if this is a so .
My mind
and what is meant
is blind
and hell bent
for I wont find
nor do I want
another you
or replacement
there is no parallel
or adjascent
a second set of apparell
or secondary casement
how could there be
when i have what is heaven sent
all i need is acknowledgement
for I believe in fair judgement
for I will drown as I stand
in the sea of repremand
because your worth it
please try to understand
for you I'd die and chop off my hand
just to proove it
and my love for you
lets just say it's very true
and I
could never lose it .
Published 31st Dec 2011
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31st Dec 2011 6:18am
of eternal love; we have all gone through those hurtful days. I relate. Good read, Paul as always.
31st Dec 2011 1:09pm
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31st Dec 2011 9:24am
31st Dec 2011 1:11pm
You listen to me right I will write what ever I like and you have no right to defend anyone that is to do with me because you talked on the web plus I don't have it in fucking lights who I'm on about plus I don't believe for one minute that you just came across my ex wife who you know little of and she knows nothing of you , just like that , there is tens of thousands of people on the net and you're trying to tell me you bumped into her , like fuck ,you know nothing if it true what you say , nothing about her or our marriage or lives together so don't you dare try to defend what you don't know and also you did say she had a profile on here so don't bullshit me
11th Jan 2012 11:19pm
and I can write however I please and if you don't like that don't read it it's simple and who the fuck are you to tell me about respect for whom I write about ? it is none of your business and what would you know calling her level headed like now you're an expert are you ? and also you insinuate I am a wanker , you really are pushing it you know that especially when you are completely off the track and don't even know either of us , but I have my doubts as to the authenticity of any of this crap as why would you care or comment like that on also that other poem when you slandered my relationship with kumiko as paedophile like , who the fuck do you think you are exactly ? and why would you care ? why ? and what web chat c'mon I want to know where you miraculously bumped into one of 7 billion people like that and how did you know it was her ? well ?????????????
12th Jan 2012 11:43pm
13th Jan 2012 00:02am
And one other thing , her name is not advertised on it don't you get that ? there is not one single person on this site that I know in the real world ok so figure it out , is this crystal ball poetry where all shall be revealed and anyhow what gives you the right to butt the fuck in on me and my life ? you don't get it do you ? or do you think your mother fucking teresa ? anyway I think it;s evident you are telling some big whopping lies as to who you are .
11th Jan 2012 2:31am
or is it Jeramey Kyle.
haha! good poem paul
comments are entertaining too :)
haha! good poem paul
comments are entertaining too :)
11th Jan 2012 2:46am
Yeah I know the cheek of it though my ex wife a canadian who does not appear in a search on here either , just so happened to bump into this dude ? fuck right off ha ha ha ha ha anyway thanks eamon and I am just a bit riled at the pure cheek of some people at times , you should check out the comments on ' a killer no way ' that should make you laugh mate ha ha
