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Happy Beautiful
.
The warmth of your smile, its
genuine, like flickering flames
of gold upon real log fires;
Those moments when re-awakening,
knowing you are not only loved,
but finding expressing such thoughts
to another, most beautiful in happy
reflection.
The warmth of your smile, its
genuine, like flickering flames
of gold upon real log fires;
Those moments when re-awakening,
knowing you are not only loved,
but finding expressing such thoughts
to another, most beautiful in happy
reflection.
Published 28th Dec 2019
Author's Note
Expressions upon love
Made Happy beautiful
Made Happy beautiful
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28th Dec 2019 5:31pm
Wonderful, Serenity. I really liked this beautiful love poem... Although short, you've relayed so much emotion in do few words. I enjoyed the warm imagery; it gives me a warm feeling :)
28th Dec 2019 5:34pm
Thankyou so much NB ♥️ for the RL
Graciously I bow to you
Happy you found it warming
Graciously I bow to you
Happy you found it warming
28th Dec 2019 5:57pm
so heart warming every word felt deeply like a warm blanet on winter night nicely written poetess...respect
28th Dec 2019 6:14pm
28th Dec 2019 6:15pm
29th Dec 2019 8:47pm
I love your delightfully cheerful expressions! They are wonderfilled and succinct in meaning.
29th Dec 2019 9:11pm
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1st Jan 2020 3:50am
Happy New Year! Hey Serenity........beautiful words and thoughts flow in every line.......gorgeous ink.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
1st Jan 2020 7:04am
27th Jan 2020 5:48pm
This is soul warming in it's simple yet deep expression and perhaps anticipation, particularly love the smile compared to flames of gold, lovely write, thank you.
27th Jan 2020 5:52pm
A warm thought on a winters night
Love and thoughts of such, makes smiles
compared to flickering flames of gold
Love and thoughts of such, makes smiles
compared to flickering flames of gold
27th Jan 2020 5:54pm
27th Jan 2020 6:22pm
27th Jan 2020 6:25pm
27th Jan 2020 6:30pm
Yeah, it's like both know, yet no one else has a clue, and as it should be, as those kinda smiles are of love for intended
27th Jan 2020 6:33pm
27th Jan 2020 6:36pm
Yep, that's the idea
Kinda ease the followers into the idea of "oh yeah I thought that was why"
Less of a shock or surprise 👌
Kinda ease the followers into the idea of "oh yeah I thought that was why"
Less of a shock or surprise 👌
27th Jan 2020 6:41pm
Well l like to shock and surprise, but I'd enjoy making them wait, some things should be treasured and guarded..
27th Jan 2020 6:45pm
Treasure the moments when slow is a keyword, make moments, even if small between two to share, all the while being guarded
Guarded is a good thing, itsnot as negative as one might think
Its sensible
Guarded is a good thing, itsnot as negative as one might think
Its sensible
27th Jan 2020 6:50pm
We think alike on this, it's all about the little moments, they become the big ones..
27th Jan 2020 6:53pm
I cherish those moments, I recall most everyone, and those I dont, I'm sure to be reminded of at somepoint
Moments make the road upon which we travel
Moments make the road upon which we travel
27th Jan 2020 6:56pm
27th Jan 2020 7:04pm
I hope one day she understands my love
I'm sure she realises how natural it all feels
I'm sure she realises how natural it all feels
27th Jan 2020 7:11pm
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