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Re. Serenity
Anonymous
28th Dec 2019 7:49am
"a smile" and nothing but? :-) A witty word orchestration!
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Re: Re. Serenity
28th Dec 2019 6:32pm
Re: Re. Serenity
Anonymous
28th Dec 2019 7:08pm
Possible answers:
You are receiving massive amounts of attention?
You know something I don't know?
This is December and your smile is frozen?
Hmmm. I'd have to be there to personally assess the situation.
(SMILE)
You are receiving massive amounts of attention?
You know something I don't know?
This is December and your smile is frozen?
Hmmm. I'd have to be there to personally assess the situation.
(SMILE)
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Re: Re. Serenity
28th Dec 2019 7:14pm
Re: Re. Serenity
Anonymous
28th Dec 2019 7:19pm
If you mean that in a "good" way, I'll confess. (Still don't have the answer to "why" you & your smile are exposed or time/date/location!) LOL
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Re: Re. Serenity
29th Dec 2019 5:58pm
Re. Serenity
What you describe is one of my would-be pictures of serenity. As a few of my poems have testified, I have done this myself in my own backyard after pre-dawn exercise runs, as long as no telltale lights indicate neighbours are up who could see me. If you live in a more isolated spot, be encouraged. Rhyme came up in my mind:
Full nude, full moon,
heed nature's tune.
Full nude, full moon,
heed nature's tune.
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Re: Re. Serenity
28th Dec 2019 6:37pm
Your comment is graciously accepted dear poet. One night I believe I will have the opportunity to be with nature and a smile. As soon as it is warm enough lol, or I won't have a smile on. I'll have frozen ta-ta's lol😬
Re: Re. Serenity
29th Dec 2019 8:19am
Our English winter is quite mild at moment, wet and windy. I have been through a few frosty mornings. Anyway when you have run you will have become warmed enough to welcome the cooling breezes.
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Re. Serenity
Anonymous
28th Dec 2019 9:44am
Then, go take a stroll 😉
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Re: Re. Serenity
28th Dec 2019 6:38pm
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Re: Re. Serenity
28th Dec 2019 6:40pm
Paint away dear poet. If your art is anything like your literary works, it'll be stunning!
Thank you for the gorgeous comment. Always Respect🙏
Thank you for the gorgeous comment. Always Respect🙏
Re. Serenity
28th Dec 2019 12:26pm
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28th Dec 2019 6:42pm
Re. Serenity
28th Dec 2019 4:11pm
Dear L,
Ditto with response from Snugglebuck. However, shedding all the excess baggage we carry just to be open and free from that is a gorgeous image and under the protective beams of the moon is a gift I can only imagine. Great write! The imagery in such brevity is wonderful! H🌷
Ditto with response from Snugglebuck. However, shedding all the excess baggage we carry just to be open and free from that is a gorgeous image and under the protective beams of the moon is a gift I can only imagine. Great write! The imagery in such brevity is wonderful! H🌷
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Re: Re. Serenity
28th Dec 2019 6:45pm
Dearest H.
What a beautiful comment you have described. It reflects exactly what I was thinking with this piece. Thank you for your kindness and generosity. Always Respect dear poet.
What a beautiful comment you have described. It reflects exactly what I was thinking with this piece. Thank you for your kindness and generosity. Always Respect dear poet.
Re. Serenity
28th Dec 2019 6:47pm
Same! Haha if only that's something one could do without it seeming "weird" but it's even more weird that it's considered weird lol
Great lil piece!
Great lil piece!
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Re: Re. Serenity
28th Dec 2019 6:52pm
Completely agree with you. It should be a natural, not wierd lol. I'll find a place one night. Thanks again Hunter. I always appreciate your input. Always Respect dear poet.
Re. Serenity
29th Dec 2019 00:47am
seems reasonable...
doable...and enjoyable.
short and sweet. I like the simpleness.
doable...and enjoyable.
short and sweet. I like the simpleness.
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Re: Re. Serenity
29th Dec 2019 6:00pm
Re. Serenity
29th Dec 2019 5:59am
Who'd of thought that such a short poem could be so impactful. Great job!
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Re: Re. Serenity
29th Dec 2019 6:01pm
Thank you my dear Damon! I appreciate you taking the time to give your input✌
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